Khasm13 : blu back...

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  1. Khasm13

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    the total tap of da mind slap
    reduced my rap filter'n out the crap
    no need to play mack addicted to cheeky eyes like crack
    your swoleness of wholeness has me blu back
    mentally...
    gently...
    lurking lines of love spoke to me
    in a language that i comprehended easily
    wet lips seasoned the
    eardrums...so much so
    it made me go rum pum pum pummmm
    love comes simply
    like an acoustic guitar strum
    from connections who don't play their feelings for dumb
    some melodies remain nameless
    while other cause some to hummmm
    to the beat of twin souls in heat
    mixed sweat makes this culinary masterpiece complete
    this love
    a mighty love
    does not make me weak
    instead i speak of a friend so unique
    and a faith so strong...no trepitation surrounds my leap
    so tru...no need to creep
    i had to peep that our bond is sweet enough to eat
    thas why you have me blu back
    in fact you got me fallin off my seat...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like khasm has been bitten by the love bug perhaps? Those rhythms of love that strum our hearts strings...I enjoyed the pace and creativity in this.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    nah...still smitten with words and phrases...
    the love of which i speak hopefully will stand tru oneday ;)
    thanks for da peep...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    :blush: wow brotha... whoever will be blessed to be bestowed with your heart my brotha will be a sista worthy of the worlds riches because in you she will have it already...

    this was moving indeed :bowdown:
     
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    this was sweetly laid out bruh ! weave ya way on love this scribe
     
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    you laid this out!!!..smh..if i didnt know better khasm in love my brother...!!
    flow head on ... one day fo sho i kno
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    RE: KHASM13

    Khasm13, I have been there just like you
    falling off seats because they wer black blu


    Seize the day
    great poem
    you have made
     
  8. PropheticNsyght

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    What can I say accpet delicious bruh!! As always you move me deeply!
     
  9. Khasm13

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    triniti...thank you my sista, your faith in my heart does my soul wonders...thanks again sweetie :)

    rich...i'm still just try'n to get my love poems on your level...thanks bruh

    mba...naw, not in love...but hopefully oneday...thanks sis

    alpha male..."Khasm13, I have been there just like you
    falling off seats because they wer black blu"
    dude...that had me laughing :lol:...thanks brothaman

    prophetic...tru love is swet enough to eat...thanks for peepin dat....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Another masterpiece by Khasm THe GREAT,
    :deal: :deal: :deal: :deal: :deal: :deal: