Black Poetry : Blow Woe ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Nov 16, 2012.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here we go again
    fighting evil,
    friend...

    Never had I expected to improve my lot in life
    arresting life of crime lacking peace of mind
    until someone suggested
    two wrongs don't
    make right

    I always blamed the White man
    for my life of vice

    Woe begone
    left me strong
    so leave that **** alone

    NOW,
    I am the right guy
    to carry such a heavy load

    Who you do is up to you
    but take a tip from me

    Life is what you make it
    Corrupt ~ the enemy


    Darryl Abdu Omari :balance:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ blood clot
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLOW WOE ~
    :baby:
    HOW LOW CAN U GO
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    So much in this touched me and brought some others to mind who, sadly, never learned these lessons.

    Well done/Well said.
     
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    precise piece brother....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love a black man
    help ease his pain
    i see You!
    such a beautiful view
    admire what you wrote here,
    dear

    (smile)
     
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