Black Poetry : "blow out the candle" (freestyle version)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 14, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    going out:
    A candlelight doesn't mean we're tight. Understand this.
    l hate scenarios. Understand this.
    Are we supposed to kiss? The "eye"dea of romance is sicknin'.

    Your style of dress no longer impresses me
    neither your lips which caress me..
    Oh yeah the feeling is good
    but let it be understood- l'm drawn no closer to you by this...

    it's the serenity , the spirit, the standard the triple Snowhere was sex included....

    Your sex is great
    Even though l would scrape you off the plate
    ln my eyes you were just a candidate running for the election
    So where's the protection for me??Don't get the wrong impression but let it be a lesson that
    superficial **** drives me away that's why i didn't stay that night

    blow out the candlelight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    j'h ya going strong blowin da candle out
    she only now wish .....dis was powerful
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hugedome.


    well... umm... er-uh... Dayum lil brother of mine!!
    it's like dat?! oh well! i probably wouldn't have
    liked her anyway!! :lol: serious-ly tho'... this one
    was... thought-provokin' & i'll leave it at that!

    itsallnfniteLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    i'm not hurt or messed up by you
    nah it's true you thought the earth
    stood still and revolved around you

    as the world continues to turn let it all
    be a lesson your game is played next time
    don't bring trojans use your mind as
    protection

    BOY DON'T START
    i'll take yo butt back to class for a history
    lesson :lol: ;)

    HOLLA! :toast:

    out.....
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah...

    tight work no doubt...

    blow out the candle.
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    dang J'hiah ... hole up ... i spent my last dolla on this candle! :)

    Love It!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    **** J
    it you had to blow it out
    sometimes it happens

    feel me

    DSS

    i'm feeling ya
     
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