Black Poetry : Blossoms Sent...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 27, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She sent him blossoms
    because they reminded her of him
    they cascaded down from
    hope's tree from the tallest limb
    These petals sincerely attempted
    to tell a story of love
    they fluttered peacefully in the wind
    like the wings of a dove
    She caught them in her hands
    before they hit the ground
    knowing they were so fragile,
    these blossoms that she found
    She saturated the flowers with her
    aura as she blew them into the air
    in hopes that the petals would reach him
    and he'd feel the love there
    And as hope would have it
    when he happened to step outside
    he saw those same petals floating down
    placing that love right by his side
    She sent him blossoms
    because they reminded her of him
    they cascaded down from
    hope's tree from the tallest limb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like the floating mist of petals cascading in da name of love
    wit hope of she unto he ......very nice drop sista watz
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No, nothing like it, thanks for responding so brotha Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome dear Queeneth
     
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    Love blossoms at every turn of phrase ~

    I love this sincerely!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again brotha Rich.
    That was so kind of you to say 1poet, much appreciated brotha.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice imagery watz....nice
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you liked the imagery deepy, thank you poet.
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautyfull sis......



    aww....








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So nice to know you liked this Auroraflower, thank you so much.
     
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