Black Poetry : Bloodstained Bedsheets

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  1. NileReflection

    NileReflection Active Member MEMBER

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    Bloodstained Bedsheets, wet with sweat
    i sit
    and stare at the color of my regret
    Crisom Sin that i will never forget
    I can't believe I..
    LET
    You

    You were dripping wet with seduction
    speaking honey into my ears
    enticed my curiosity and my desire to feel loved.
    ...to just feel...

    You poured promises
    filling the cup of my naivete
    until you had me convinced that i wanted something i didn't know.

    You told me nothing would hurt and I...
    in my drunken stupor, tumbled in the dark with you.

    Before the altar of my innocence
    you took away my inner child
    and brought forth sensations in me,yet unborn.
    As i held on for dear life
    because i felt a part of myself dying

    Red moon
    crushed rose petal beneath my womb
    entombed in the permanance
    of every moment of this inner death.

    After you left I slept..alone
    I laid...alone
    Afraid...alone
    Trying to rationalize the speed at which my life changed.
    And the intensity at which a part of me departed, broken from my whole.

    Tell Daddy his little girl is dead
    Read it on the bloodstained bedsheets on her bed.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tyte scribe. deep too.much love :)
     
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    Great description of innocence snatched away too soon.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was felt deep within the great rip off stripped !!
     
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    deep all i can say right now...
    tight flow .....
     
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    Whoa...

    This was tight, indeed.
     
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    This was very tight. Much love for this one.
     
  8. NileReflection

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    Hotep

    Thanks for the love... :fairy:
     
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    This was extremely deep. Alot to think about at this time and age.
     
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    [email protected]..
    a vivid picture of innocence taken
    whoa...
    this was a strong piece right here
    one love
    khasm
     
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