Black Poetry : Blood On My Dress

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  1. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She walked out the house behind her closing the door.
    He turned and smiled at me, as if he's sick and im the cure.
    He tried to grab me up but i quickly ran away.
    i hid in the closet where i figured i was safe.
    He busted in my room and threw open the door.
    I knew he was drinking, the scent was seeping through his pores.
    "Please dont hurt me" I screamed, but my plea was not enough.
    He threw me on the bed and kissed me so rough.
    He touched me in places a child shouldnt be touched.
    "Stop" I screamed but he then hit my face.
    He told me to shut up, as he entered my secret place.
    He said it was okay and that he was almost done.
    Then he kissed me in my mouth and said "isnt this fun?"
    I tried to push him off but his force was too strong.
    I kept asking God "why is mommy taking so long?"
    He tried to stroke my hair and say its alright.
    Then he told me what we did was a natural part of life.
    He said it would happend whether i did or didnt want it.
    Then he said i had it all, and i always tried to flaunt it.
    But i dont understand how that could possibly be,
    Because i was only eight when he chose to penetrate me.
    He took my innocence and snatched my virginity.
    And when i tried to tell mommy, she said it was my complex simplicity.
    So it was my fault that i got raped.
    It was my fault that i was only EIGHT!
    All these feelings i tried to confess,
    They didnt believe me....until they seen the blood on my dress.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forget the dress, I'm more concern with the blood from your heart.
    whew......let me say this with a feeling,
    ...after he was released from the "ER" ...penis-less, he would forever flinch whenever he seen the opposite sex, and you can take that...to the bank!!
     
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    who has the rites to a virgin .......NO ONE ! NO ONE !
    this was felt and sadly pose'd trust me his bleep would be cold
    or strooled cross the road because this was bold to strip the
    RITES of a child a virgin may that heart heal from the spill ....... :censored:
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You vividly described something that should never, ever happen but unfortunately does, all too often. Such a sorrowful piece poet.
     
  5. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that post painted a vivid picture of
    what happens so much in todays
    society
    and its not only strangers who are raping
    children, its people in your own
    homes....fathers, uncles, brothers, mothers
    its sick
    nice post!!!
     
  6. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your voice has been heard

    It is very hard to speak out about something so hurtful especially when you thought they were the ones that would always protect you. Thank you for sharing this piece. :bam:

    One_Love
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U go girl that wus a very sad but well-written piece and it reminded me kinda of a book i jus read call "God don't like Ugly" and i read another book with sumthin like that in it and i mean everytime i read stuff like that i get so enraged with anger. Why does any one think they have the right to take anyone's pureness from them? Only a sick, vindictive, retarded person would do something like that and i pray that this didn't happen to u cuz i could only imagine how u felt or feel. Keep writin and imma keep readin.
     
  8. Khasm13

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    wow...thas all i can say to this vivid nightmare...
    i hope this is only fiction...heartfelt scribe poet...flow on

    one love
    khasm
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im with khasm on this...im hopin this is just fiction for you cause i wouldnt wish that on my worst enemy...but this was very heartfelt and sharp like a dagger....very true,this happens alot nowadayz and its a fizzukt up ting ting to happen to someone....i was deeply concerned reading this peice for this person,1nce agaion hopin it aint you,but if so,the world needs strong peopel to speak up on it and let the world know that this shieeet aint right....

    in other places its like ,legal....crazy....i cant even dwell on itl...but very informative and deep post...blessings to you....


    adios
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    powerful piece...
    rich in imagery....i saw and felt it all..
    i echo khasm and lurk...i hope this poetic and not a real hurt...
     
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