Black Poetry : Bliss is her name...

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  1. Naturner

    Naturner New Member MEMBER

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    Bliss is Her Name...

    Many are in pursuit of your hand
    a competition that's not for the weak
    all who pursue you must accept your rejection
    because you will only accept the unique
    I am the man that you seek, my sweet
    I know our meeting wasn't just a lucky surprise
    this unification was conceived by true fate
    our new union will never see love's demise!
    Queen of queens, that has finally found her King!
    a King that has finally found his ultimate treasure
    a woman that is beautiful in both body and spirit
    her worth to me cannot be truly measured!
    Everything about her makes me very thankful
    and everytime we are together is an added plus
    I pray that God will assist us in our new journey
    we shall pray for God to always be with us
    Love has engulfed itself in our new alliance
    place this union in the lover's hall of fame
    I shall reveal the name of my new Queen
    Here she is and Bliss is her name!

    -Naturner 08'
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhh this was sweet and endearing.
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Bliss is her name...

    Brother,

    You wrote this one for me! Thanks! Cause, Bliss is her Name!

    (how is the thread review going?)
     
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    May you meet bliss and embrace her for all the glory she's worth. This was a lovely piece. Welcome to Destee.com, and to the poetry forum. Looking forward to reading more from you brother.
     
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    Brother Naturner ... this is so beautiful ... oh my gosh ... but wait ... you told me that you were ... well ... you know what you told me! :)

    She must be a beautiful Sister to have you speaking of her in this way.

    Maybe we can get you to read it on the mic for us Friday Night ?! :)

    Thank You For Sharing! :grouphug:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    whoa...... do i know her surely she will love this
     
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    Here's to you :wine: in hopes that you always be ...
    "Bliss-Fully Happy"
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Isn't She Wonderful! Talking about Bliss!
     
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    Naturner:
    Now this is oh so lovely and sweet.
    Made me wish my name was Bliss.:)


    Much Luv
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!





    That would be great, or did I miss it?

     
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