Black Poetry : blink

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    here i am totally exposed
    naked from heart to soul
    my body totally immersed in the red steam
    streaming from the howl of your love's call
    my wings spread wide waiting for you
    to come place your head on my breasts
    so you can feel the love pulsating inside me
    that has been and always will be only yours

    please let me fly you away in the warmth of my love
    jupiter stretching her light so the whole world can witness
    me naked levitating before you my wings spread wide
    don't be afraid...come claim what is yours
    my complete heart and compassionate love

    who. am. i?
     
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    (a peom is only a poem)

    You are the WHOLE
    Of the depths of my SOUL
    You hold the cup
    Of my
    Life

    You are the PILLOW
    That allows me to rest
    …the BEST
    Of each breath
    I breathe

    You are my PEACE

    Consume me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whereas in place
    the unknown vow
    unto thee i fly peaceful
    inside da rapture nude

    each breath i breathe deep
    signs of compassion
    under thou wings i rest
    solo as i venture places
    allowed to touch

    take me deep
    fly and behold in me
    love has lifted da soul
    take me now!
     
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    Brother Poet baller,

    It is so beautiful when two poems fall in love; indifferent to and independent of their authors. Your poem is stunning and breath-taking, my friend.
    Thank you. (smile)
     
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    close your eyes then place your lips on mine
    inhale and breathe me and the scent of my love in
    take your time, do it slow, feel my wings slip
    around your heart housing your love in my peace

    oooo... there you go, i can feel your soul glow
    hold on to me as i scoop you up in my love's flight
    floating above the city lights to place you
    warmly on my continent of care
    for there resides all you need
    my renewed love and self-contained peace

    who. am. i?
     
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    Blink, and I might have missed a glimpse of your beautiful soul.
     
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    Awww, what a heartfelt thing to say. (smile)
     
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    comfort zone of compassionate warmth
    as i rest my heart at yo temple
    lay my head upon ya breast
    to hear the melodies of ya heart beat

    take me now !
     
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    swoop. i've got you
    we soaring safely
    towards our beloved moon
    your heart tucked
    inside my deep abiding wings
    the fresh tasting breeze
    mixing in my warm soul
    supplying the air your love breathes
    hold on to me don't let go
    promising your heart and love
    the flight of their lives, swoop.

    who. am. i?
     
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