Black Poetry : blink

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  1. TotalView

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    (a peom is only a poem)

    You are the WHOLE
    Of the depths of my SOUL
    You hold the cup
    Of my
    Life

    You are the PILLOW
    That allows me to rest
    …the BEST
    Of each breath
    I breathe

    You are my PEACE

    Consume me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whereas in place
    the unknown vow
    unto thee i fly peaceful
    inside da rapture nude

    each breath i breathe deep
    signs of compassion
    under thou wings i rest
    solo as i venture places
    allowed to touch

    take me deep
    fly and behold in me
    love has lifted da soul
    take me now!
     
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    Brother Poet baller,

    It is so beautiful when two poems fall in love; indifferent to and independent of their authors. Your poem is stunning and breath-taking, my friend.
    Thank you. (smile)
     
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    Blink, and I might have missed a glimpse of your beautiful soul.
     
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    Awww, what a heartfelt thing to say. (smile)
     
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    comfort zone of compassionate warmth
    as i rest my heart at yo temple
    lay my head upon ya breast
    to hear the melodies of ya heart beat

    take me now !
     
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