Quiet Poetry Lounge : BLING

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Aug 28, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    :read: I love the diamonds, gold, platinum necklace, an cloths,
    The life of luxury, vintage items, the green eyes that show your soul,
    With out you, I don't know what I would do,
    Skies once cloudy, turn to sunshine with rays of blue,
    Everything's happy, I will kill for you, as your thought invokes me,
    Flashing you in my presence, is known to provoke me,
    To do things I would normally do only in tight situations,
    But your my everything, my heart an soul, an I cant resist your temptation,

    I'll grab my burner, an put a life on a milk carton to have you,
    You've made me show those who grab you, just what the mack do,
    Pushing up on what's mine, is a life line soon to cease,
    An come time, my shine will be shown through out these streets,

    With you... when I walk, I glisten,
    With you... when I talk, they listen,
    With you... when I hit a store, its evident how im living,

    I love your smell, the touch an sight of you is pleasing to the eye,
    Your the reason many in this world may die, fry, or cry,
    Because with out you, people will hit rock bottom, an act in emotion,
    But with you, many stay with a strong devotion,
    An as time evolves, your worth becomes more an more,
    From Elsalvador, to India's sea shores,
    We all thirst for you, so powerful yet so silent,
    Through history of the world, you have caused many to lead in defiance,
    Maybe a tyrant,
    Maybe the root of all evil,
    Maybe the reason for sirens,
    An maybe the beginning of the end for many people,

    But need I really say, in many way's after ways,
    Without money, a sunny days, just a sunny day....
    An I love money!

    If you cheated an read the bottom 1st then you messed the whole thing up... So I hope I kept you thinking I was talking about a female but gave the idea I was refering to money through the whole thing... thats what I was trying to do...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said well felt tyte drop !
    welcome to the family at destee.com

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  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight drop....
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You achieved what you were trying to do poet. Very crafty piece of writing.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet..."I really like your style..." :coffee:

    and I didn't cheat...I wanted the full experience

    and while I knew you were talking about money...

    there are people in this world that think their

    money can keep them warm...so I wouldn't be

    suprised if they speak of it as though it were

    a woman or man...

    ^5 Poet....I loved it!
     
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