Black Poetry : BLINDED

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  1. NastaRyder

    NastaRyder Member MEMBER

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    I've been blinded and raided
    My words no longer my own
    An act of a despite theft
    I have no one to charge
    But myself….

    To have opened my mind
    And shared words so intimate and passionate
    Stripped that which was my thoughts
    Before I knew what was happening.

    For the love of what belongs to me
    I struggle to take them back.
    But they have been changed around
    The truth no longer the truth and the facts no longer facts…

    Unfamiliar to me now and no longer recognize
    Given a new title and nothing I can memorize.
    They took a part of my soul, feelings, and desires
    Someone copyrighted my words, erased my existence,
    And sent them out to be admired

    I've been blinded and raided
    My words no longer my own
    I shared my words with world for a moment
    Closed my eyes and they were gone.


    Nasta

    NastaRyder
    :hot:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey welcome again....nice drop..
    posed well...flow on:angel1:
    hope this wasnt true...
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Blinded

    The lowest form of identity theft cannot keep them chickens from coming home to roost-

    1poetsought ~ :spin:
     
  4. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO B!!!

    this was a nice piece..i enjoyed tha read.....keep postin up those gems girl...onelove!
     
  5. Khasm13

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    once bitten
    flame and venom
    i start spitten
    non creative cats steal whats written
    thas when
    their grill piece i start hit'n

    fricken bums
    i cant stand a thief...
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome this beautiful scribe within
    ya pen has much to say flow on
     
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