Black Poetry : blinded by deception

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  1. ARKontheRiSe

    ARKontheRiSe Member MEMBER

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    Why do you only want him when it is convenient for you
    Coming to see him only until you find someone better to do
    You know you do not want him
    Playing games with his heart
    He is so blindly in love with you
    That he cant tell the lies and the truth apart
    You only want him because your friends left you to burn
    They saw the *witch inside of you, they had to relocate
    Change positions to make a better situation
    Sadly to say this
    But you do have him wrapped around your finger
    you think its cool
    only ur making him look like a *dang fool
    He’s always coming to your rescue
    Providing your every need
    He is stuck on your *butt
    As hard as that *crap is to believe
    The love he has for you
    Boggles my *dang mind
    Deceptions is all he knows
    The truth is no where in site
    Being told lies, lies and more lies
    So blindly in love
    He cant even see the games you play
    Don’t even recognize
    The deception on your face
    “What a dumbass” I keep thinking
    To even continue to be your friend
    You did his *butt dirty
    With your ability to pretend
    To be someone that he could love, cherish and be with forever
    Oh you *witch
    U think you are so clever..
    But I see behind your lies
    Your fakeness and the smiles
    always remember this
    What is done in the dark
    Will come to LIGHT!

    *=had to replace some words
     
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    this was tyte and blindly decept by the heart
    thankz for making adjustments but i know the lines

    one whom falsely decept to gain in the heart
    with lies and blindly confess will pay in the end
    well done and expressed .......eyes wide shut!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody likes to feel as though their love is being toyed with, it's quite painful. Life is funny, sometime in the future, when this person actually does fall in love, she will get played. Very strongly posed poet.
     
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    Prince Yakeem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The greatest and most tragic love story...great work
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great flow. This is a soul searching piece. It made me recall incidents I know that are quite simular. Where poeple were hard played. I like this. Keep sharing.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We often say..."the wife/boy/girl friend/lover is always the last to know" ...not so!! (imo) they are usually the first to know, just the last to face it, we tend to turn a blind eye to what we want to go blindly disappear..in short some of us live our life in denial.
    nice piece poet, I can relate to all that's saiid, keep pushing the pen
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice peice of work poet...
     
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