Black Poetry : Blind to Love

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  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sun rises
    The birds chirp
    His eyes open,
    His waking thought is of she

    Brushes his teeth
    Submerged in rays of water
    He hears her voice
    As he thinks of she

    Within the day,
    He hears those moment-filled songs
    He remembers that last conversation
    He reminisces on their lips touch
    As he is thinking of she

    In a daze,
    He relives warm cuddles
    He’s hot….because…
    He feels her love,
    As he thinks of she

    He absorbs her knowledge
    Feeds on her drive
    He holds to every syllable that leaves her lips
    ..but…

    ….he says she’s just a friend

    Blk Kween
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the he/she lines. He just don't know what he knows.
    Thanks for this.
    BE
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!!

    I love how dis was displayed out wit the he/she thang
    now i sit and dig deep into this .....get back at ya!:heart:
     
  4. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank

    I extend great thanks to you, B & cousin of mine.

    Blk Kween
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blindly loved

    she offer he the gift of love yet he not see ......:heart:
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    even Ray Charles can see the "wife" in her...

    forgive us men, for sometimes we don't see... she.

    jh.
     
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    I'm feeling the incredible

    angst here..

    and I agree with all before me....J'hiah has summed it up nicely.

    Scribe Kween.

    a
     
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