Black Poetry : BLIND OBSESSION

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Went in eyez closed
    blindly obsessed
    on the standard of love

    kissed by the motion
    crossed wit emotions
    the bite was laid
    untouched by handz
    love became an open
    door to obsession

    the caress of mental play
    captured in the beast
    of rapture only if the third eye
    was able to see the
    warp of the kiss

    heart stolen
    mind taken
    obsessed
    under the
    glist of a bite
    emotions flair
    body temp rise
    heat become steam
    feverish notions

    Love move left
    naked nudity
    silent cry
    heart frozen
    only thing eyez see
    is a bliss from a
    story tale of
    sleepin beauty
    the passion spread
    redemption cast
    love be not it's lust
    uncover the secret
    unlock the womb
    enter the acts of love
    taken by the warth of
    obsessional passion
    laying dirty feelin
    da bite of a snake
    what was once labled
    thee virgin
    lost virginity under
    Blind Obsession
    a tear fall
    unable to understand.

    was it love of obsession
    is it the bite of a snake
    blindly false passion
    had lust over powered
    the mind and did the heart
    just say yes !? :confused: :( :maddd: :luvv: :grin:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i read i stick to every word..as you carried me thru this story
    of a false love ....wow..this was deep...like a move in motion
     
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    crazy how one can seduce from obsession
    and steal another virginity in a passionate lust
    blind eye miss the meaning of true love....Thankz angel
     
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    $$RICH$$, I do feel ya words, sweetie. This is really really beautiful.
     
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    thankz gempis.........the emotions flowin leaving eyez
    blind to the facts of a cheap thrill from an obsessional
    bliss of lust not love and now weep in the mass of lost
    virginity
    who hold da rites !!?
    no one....
     
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    its deep how one can prey
    not thinkin of da outcome...
    a heart broken is the end everytime...
    and he moves on with is worthless game...

    in our world its many games
    and lessons to be learn
    and not the ones in school
    its the ones on da street
    dat get ya everytime...

    your welcome it was a good read
    i like it anyway
     
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    yes angel thank u and ur on target
    the street game leave a heart to blame
    false love and decite
    it's costly and damage the out look
     
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    so sad the confussion
    2 vibes off beat
    one feel from the heart
    one feel from the lust
    giving the heart thinking there is trust
    to the other it is only lust
    so sad the tale that you
    have unfold
    the heart sometmes heal
    do the scar ever fade??????????
    Peace
     
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    olak............thank u let them turn and humble touch

    Bluewater .....indeed one heal yet the scar is forever
    from the lost of what was a prime jewel
    thank u
     
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    Powerful, deep... lustful obsessions, I am truely feeling you here
    thanks for sharing
     
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