Black Poetry : blind men see

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Feb 20, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blind Men See

    Even though they told to stop my song

    Here it goes man
    Life in the fast lane, labeled it cash game
    Rebirth of the street fame
    40 inches to my goals man

    Kept flowing, like h20, chemical induction
    The game here is like marketing with seduction
    Poison fed to me, keep the meals
    Healing factor, wolf heals

    The streets is lost, g, u see
    I once watched a blind man see

    Get it, grinding, zoning with the face
    Crimes, I was here but this dude has my face
    My honor, I give no honor
    If a word slips the 1st, cut my tongue

    The spoke, spokesman, it was spoken
    The water is deep, but I’m floating
    A little change falls thru the cracks
    Till then I will not stop breaking backs


    The streets is lost, g, u see
    I once watched a blind man see

    Who, the dream, the eyes behind enterprise
    The ingredients of my brain, work, help my cakes rise
    In perspective, render my views
    Who, objectives project, the spectrum seemed blue

    Electromagnetic, the prism is red
    I grind with my feet and hands, thru my head
    All of a sudden, the thunder rumbles
    Only whispers of us make the opposition stumble

    The streets is lost, g, u see
    I once watched a blind man see

    In lament, the difference from pappas and ramens
    Watch the circus closely, you’ll see the keys to taming
    Soon, dropped when the presence is in the room
    Out of tune, who spoke too soon?




    "bummin 2 a buspass"

    copyright daniel davis 2k1-2k4
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have much talent brother...keep cultivating it...and let the world see what you see.

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    blak
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this flow indeed
    nice..thanks for sharing
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother your flow is tight as always, peace!
     
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