Quiet Poetry Lounge : Blind fate

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Not long ago just like before
    sensual love await my door
    double crossed by feeling to da core
    was she here by fate
    or was i just another blind mate

    Inner action body speak
    mind talking eyes of a beast
    came in peace cascading beauty
    never was about da booty
    love fate justice un-rulely

    Just like times before
    faded picture she was no more
    why she had to come and go
    left her worth upon my door
    on my knees i hit da floor

    why why blind fate my heart pour
    living along trying to restow
    i knew you before i knew myself
    taste the hormones of your wealth
    felt da ripple of ya caress

    I wimpple down all your worth
    u came in da night like a curse
    claim me eyes wide shut
    cast me like a daily bet
    i lone u forever in my spool

    Why so blindly such broken rules
    i so love beyond my mind
    way pass this heart of mines
    but yet in da pits of my soul
    where i only carry u unconditionally

    was you just my blind fate
    a fracture dream in da night
    or my own foolish act of lust
    is it just i dread to have u as my own
    to cherish and love as i abid to have & hold

    BLIND FATE

    yo de veras hacer necesitar tu mi amar:flowers:
    :em2200::em4700::blowkiss::hearts4::10600::luv::luvv:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece made me think about that age old question, what do you regret most, the things you've done, or the things you didn't do. Some things you wish there was a crystal ball for. I hear ya on this.
     
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    it is necessary for me to have your love as well my love.......love the passion in this drop..........
    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime fate is blind and judgement is passed when you wish u did and then u wish u didn't
    thankz watz ....

    so happy u felt da passion of love from this Nevar thankz sis
     
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    your welcome my love you are so welcomed!
     
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    Thank u ..........from my heart
     
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