Black Poetry : Blind Date

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I need to spell it out to you?
    I don’t mean to be so aggressive,
    But I am really digging you.
    Is there a possibility,
    That we can get together and see.
    How beautiful you and I can be.
    I’ve been waiting so patiently,
    And I don’t want you to get away from me.
    Because weight broke the wagon, you see.
    And I‘ve been trying to let you take the lead.
    But I think you might need some assistance from me.
    I realize that you have never laid eyes on me.
    But that is only a minor technicality.
    And I posses the remedy.
    How bout we put all our cards on the table.
    I have nothing to hide,
    I am confident and able.
    I want us to be each others,
    Mental, emotional, and sexual fantasy.
    So baby, stop playing hard to get,
    Because the hard to get people don’t get got.
    And it would be much easier for me to catch you,
    If you wanted to be caught.
    Please don’t take this the wrong way.
    I am not only interested in a lay,
    Tricks are for kids and I don’t have time to play.
    I am fascinated by the intelligent things that you say, and
    You teased my soul with your powerful rhymes.
    Causing me to want to spend some time with you.
    You said it yourself, that we are already friends.
    So pick a time, date, and place,
    And let the romance and intimacy begin.
    I don’t mean to handle you in this way,
    But, D*** your on my mind,
    EVERY F*****’ DAY!
    And since I could not figure out what to do,
    I decided to take this avenue.
    :smooch: BABY, I WANT YOU!​
     
  2. WIZDOM4MILES

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    DATS hot good good poem, keepem comin,
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WIZDOM. thanks so much for the luv.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee 4EVERLUV

    This is very nice. Sincere and straight to the point.

    So baby, stop playing hard to get,
    Because the hard to get people don’t get got.
    And it would be much easier for me to catch you,
    If you wanted to be caught.


    As it ended your last line BABY, I WANT YOU! I thought would make another great title for this flow. This does say exactly that.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee

    That's a great suggestion maybe that will be my Pt. 2. I appreciate the luv.
     
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    love how you put it down on this one sis flo on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    You don't have to call me twice
    you can pose as my wife
    making a we of u and me
    this how my true love spree

    we can roll in deep pleasure
    go to whatever measure
    mentally , morally , spiriturally
    to dance in our sweet fantasy
    so u can feel me romanticly

    No need u hide
    from what's deep inside
    where da love cascading reside
    to join hands let it all ride
    as we rock da waves of a tide

    This love is more then a lay
    and some kiddy lit play
    it's deep sweet and devine
    it's da warm like sunshine
    it pours like summer rain
    never hurts or leave any pain
    so when u ready just call my
    NAME surely my heart will claim.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I can tell your not the same,

    As most brothas.
    You say things,
    I’ve never heard before,
    Make my heart drop to the floor,
    And I just can’t take it anymore,
    Your words pierce me to the core,
    Of my Heart.

    So I figured I would just roll the dice,
    And if I had to call twice,
    It would be worth the price
    To feel your luv.

    I’m really not the shy type,
    I be sittin over hear getting all hype,
    When I read your flo.
    Wondering how many days
    I was going to let go
    By
    Before I let you know.

    How you move my soul,
    And my mind,
    Tease my body,
    And make me cry,

    Every time I read a line,
    from your pen.

    I am amazed.
    Over
    and
    Over
    and
    Over
    Again.

    Which brought me to this moment.
    And I don’t feel no pain,
    You already know I Luv the rain.:wink:

    And I was not hiding,
    Just enjoying what you were
    providing...
     
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    Turn such blind eye
    let thy date be live
    nothing more to say
    just lead sho me da way
    every time u have droped
    i was there to catch u up
    allow me in ya world
    as i take u into da bedded garden
    beyond the wishing well
    as my love cast it's spell
    dance in the radiant glow
    let ya body move and more
    but cry never no mo
    for what my heart have in store
    when i bring da uncore
    let ya soul free
    allow it upon me for a we
    and then we will surely see
    what true love can really be
    because i am da shower
    to every drop
    like rain my love never stops
    let me sprinkle ya once again
    so u know how we mend .
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So lets put an end
    to the mystery of,
    I and U
    And make it WE

    Your words take
    Me to a place
    That makes me feel so safe.
    I already know
    Where to go
    Southwest flies to
    Chicago.

    Your gonna make me cum
    Get your flo, in the flesh,
    The way I prefer it best.
    No need to put you
    through any tests.
    You’ve already passed
    With flyn colors
    YOU BEAUTIFUL BLAK BROTHA.

    Bring that uncore
    as we soar.
    I’m on my knees,
    Begging, please more, more, more.
    Of what you have in store
    for me.

    I feel your shower,
    It has such power,
    Over me.

    Making me crave to see,
    this true luv that u give,
    so freely and passionately.

    I don’t mind being under your spell
    Can’t you tell,
    I’ve already fell…
    :luvv:
     
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