Black Poetry : ...Blessings in Disguise...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the Father of the Child growing inside me...

    Am I falling for you?
    Cuz your more of a man than I’ve had before
    Cuz you make me smile and make me want more
    Am I falling for you?
    Its starting to become more than physical
    Its beginning to move to the emotional
    Am I falling for you?
    Cuz we created a life and life is changing
    If I close my eyes I can picture you chasing
    A little girl or a little boy
    But I get scared sometimes and I call on the Lord
    Am I falling for you?
    And are you only here with me
    Because I’m carrying a human being?
    Stemmed from you to me
    Am I falling for you?
    I feel the feelings getting stronger
    But its so d*mn scary to not know if we’ll get stronger
    I feel the difference in your touch, in you eyes
    Is it love or is it only a disguise?
    Am I falling for you?
    You say you’ve never been in love before
    Don’t know if your capable of letting yourself love me and more
    I know you’ll always be here with me
    And I guess in it’s own way that’s a blessing
    So whether we work or whether we stray
    Promise me you’ll be a Father of your unborn child always…


    To My Heavenly Father who keeps me growing spiritually…

    Am I falling for him?
    Cuz you know the hellish relationships I’ve been through
    Not getting the respect I deserved or settling for what I thought was true
    Am I falling for him?
    It started off as liking him and physical
    I could see myself maybe falling in love emotional
    But I didn’t expect to create a child’s life
    And fact that he cares gives me strength to get through nights
    But I wake up in the morning and get so angry
    I get so scared and the nightmares wake me
    Am I falling for him?
    Maybe its happening this way for a reason
    Maybe one day I’ll see why and know the reason
    Am I falling for him?
    In some ways it doesn’t make sense
    All those long relationships
    Where I didn’t feel appreciated
    And I didn’t feel any type of elation
    Then a good man comes along
    And I think that our care can turn strong
    But we’ve created a life and maybe a love
    Maybe you gave me three blessings in disguise
    A new life and a new love and you’ve opened my eyes…
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Color Him Father, and fall for nothing.

    Stay blessed.
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There but for the grace of God...
    I was feelin your flo, poet.
    One love
     
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    i truly enjoyed this emotional piece of yours and hows the pregnancy going. hope everything alright. right now any emotions your feeling now are a part of motherhood. just pray to the lord baby gurl and he will lighten your load and will erase all doubts.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments everybody:)
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i waz luvin dat drop and feelin it as well
    and my sistah i dink u is fallin 4 him n he's fallin 4 u 2
    And i kno luv and feelinz can be tricky, buh yo heart kno'z wen its real
    so flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A



    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling every line sista , keep ya head up high allow da heart
    it cascade and bath in the beauty of warmth u will know through
    da emotions shown paint him daddy to thy child and da love to
    one's heart hold it all close.
     
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