Black Poetry : Blessed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Mar 5, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you made me special
    when you took me in your
    thoughts and bathed me
    in your heart’s pure love…

    I am only flesh and blood
    vulnerable to ills and
    woes…
    not impervious to pain
    and suffering

    but you made me
    more ~ made me soar

    and I can touch the heavens
    when you take me in
    your thoughts
    warm me with your
    love… filling me with
    hope of things to come

    I am only human
    mistakes I’ve made…
    too numerous to count
    failed attempts at success,
    could fill volumes

    but

    you make me beautiful
    strong, courageous
    and almost invincible
    when you love me with
    your mind, see me with
    your heart…touch me with
    invisible hands, feel me with
    your soul

    only you can
    reach me where I live
    inside

    my soul was naked
    until you found me,
    clothed me in your love


    and made me special

    Alyce, 2001
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Yes Yes Yes!

    Let the church say Amen!

    :angel1:

    Destee
     
  3. herman

    herman Member MEMBER

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    u r

    a worker of miracles ~ could it be possible the way you ink your heart's innermost feelings exceeds your perfect, loving touch? I think not.

    You are certainly blessed ~ and what man would not bestow his complete love and devotion upon one like you, A? You are most rare.

    H
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    Destee :)

    and Herman, you are far too kind.

    A
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're in my mind, Ms A....

    ...hmmm.

    THANK YOU.
     
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    Alyce, girl you invoking emotions from deep within. Loving this flow my sista...
     
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    "I can touch the heavens..."

    This beautiful line sums up your spirit so eloquently...because that's what you do when you write...you touch heaven

    *perly-gates*

    a blackbelle edition
     
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    As always a wonderful read for all of the senses.
     
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    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is no doubt

    he's as special as you.

    CELA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    perfection from the atic sista A...............love this piece
     
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