Black Poetry : "Blessed are Women"

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blessed are women
    The right when we were wrong
    And just Left
    Dang they are not right
    But the center of our median
    Which causes us to drive wildly over the median
    To be more than the average DUI
    Because we do see two fingers
    And we can
    Do U & I
    So don’t round down
    When we fail
    Miss the curve
    for your curves
    Slide against the rails
    But round us up
    Because we stay up
    Because of you
    The addition
    To our hearts
    When the world subtracts
    From us
    Calls us Good then Bad
    When we are a way better a whole number
    With our One
    That is willing to go through H
    So we can Find I
    Who we really are
    That’s greater than
    But only a decimal.
    Without a fraction
    And the sum of U
    (Inside our parenthesis)
    Now Try to Divide That!
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tha-Emissary:
    What a SPLENDID write.
    Your words speak volumes.


    Much Luv
     
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    Your word play was so clever poet, I mean I could quote a few lines but the whole piece was so artful in the way it was constructed. But most of all the sentiment, chock full of adoration.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I did the math love,
    checked it...double checked it ...twice!
    ...so I know my math is correct...

    Black
    Divine
    Love
    _________
    Divinity​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome math test in a devine way flow on poet
     
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    I enjoyed the mathmetical play on something so out of scope my brother :read:
    I was a nerd in school lol so math in writing...
    goood stuff to me :)
    Props poet!
     
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    blessed are the women...

    who can appreciate the things men go through...to get at them...to please them...to keep them entertained enough so that they don't stray, and stuff. AND blessed are you, poet, for telling them.

    let the river flow.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This adds up to a wonderful one!
    I dig the way this flowed down!


    Thank you!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cocoabutterskyn: Glad you you dig it and I'm looking forward to reading some cocoabutter creme flows not that winters coming in so my legs won't be looking ashy :)

    Triniti: Much luv to you sista cause I'm a nerd too and failed Algebra twice. Don't tell nobody I was in D-Wing. Shhhhh!

    Rich: Always glad to have you sum it up and keep on testing the sky's limits to the next poetic power.

    To the Queen of tswana: You make E=mc2 look like yesterday with that extradionary equation. You got my props and an A+!

    4EverLuv: Well lately I've been looking looking for a job and bootlegging them mechanic skillz my pops taught me but you know it's always good to come home to your warm words and everyones postive energy streaming here. Stay you & Keep Freestyling Your Destiny!
     
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    Wow as the math teacher I can really appreciate your mathematical equation that equated to an awesome write. This was really well written my brother.
     
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