Black Poetry : bleading heartz

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 24, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this poem is for
    the blood of mindz wasted
    that flows into the streets
    ....a poisonous scarlet
    from the drug dealahs
    and harlets,

    their mental are
    eclipsed and hidden
    in darkness

    this poem is for
    the soul that drinks
    in redrum (murder)
    that kurupts and
    erupts explosion

    xpounding on
    a phucked up
    mindz
    causing tyme
    to....
    just.....
    stop......
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is deep and stimulating. Keep flowing.

    Love and Peace,
    Foxy.....................
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like it...:toast:
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall, i know i havent been posting to much, but i'll make it up to u!;)