Quiet Poetry Lounge : blazzin storms

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Immortal memories pose'd in heart
    wounded by inspirations of sadness
    flicked madness grow old like an sour
    ignorance conquering the confused
    task before thee that life has delt one
    feeling as the world caving in i see
    da pour of visions ahead please
    hold me til the storm past then
    allow me to move on my own inside
    da pasture of reasons to understand
    as i silent hype a tone sought creeping
    inside heavens walls of my mind i think
    of all it's beauty unleast in da moment
    brings rainfall to my face as this myth
    take place on the emotions of my soul
    i slowly rerun da day and days ahead
    dedicated it all to my new kingdom of
    heavy sorrows as i awaken from this
    comatoes and cross feelings unto thy
    Father i be rejoicing the lift GOD delt me
    finding new meanings through da many
    wired obstacles and ventures pass in
    life live on the brinks at the edge of
    a corner stone inside the maze until
    i found my true exsistance
    now i fly solo to only hear da storm
    outside my beings fire burns but low
    if at all and love covers my soul like
    a wet blanket u can't ova turn my
    light but step into it and rejoice the
    life we have struggled lone enough
    my salty tears of pools stain the
    place i stand to let all know i weep
    in the grace of unity & united of a
    black nation da storms of blazzin
    depth is ova we are da people let
    da myth go !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep i likes when your mental takes over...
    it be real and raw and all truth

    your faith will hold you...ok i feel it here it come....

    within lays the faith
    and the storm will
    pass over
    but never fight solo
    for Our Father
    will fight the battle for you
    give it up
    place it in his hands...
    and all will clear
    to a brighter day!!!!
    let him walk through
    the dark with you....
    VICTORY shall be yours...

    ok back to the poem....
    this was a tight strong meaning
    and i felt the pain and sadness
    release..because allwill be ok....

    my hands on they own tonight....smh

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up do let me go after the storm
    so u walk da path alone to understand
    thankz sistah Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep heavy....flow it and release....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we think we are totally alone in the storm, those are the times that God holds your hand the tightest, but alas, we often don't feel his grasp. Thank God we can flow the worries out onto paper...thank God we are poets.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed watz .....releasing it brings comfort thankz sis.
     
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    much lov

    tight flow :luvv:
     
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    very deep..i'm lovin it my brotha




    Love360




    -lowkey
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups to ya lowkey Thankzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!
     
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    I absolutely love this stanza...

    Awesome work!
     
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