Black Poetry : Blazing Hot!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blazing hot, and it's not even August.
    Tempers flare and people staring
    Sunlight glaring off the bumpers
    of semi's...glazed over looks in the
    babies eyes.

    Sweat drips profusely from the brow
    of the runner. And this is just the
    beginning of summer. Death looms
    for the frail in health, A/c blaring
    for those with much wealth.

    Thin slip dresses carressed by much
    needed breezes. Man without shirt
    poses as he pleases. Someone on
    the standing room only bus sneezes.
    And we start to worry about contagious
    diseases.

    Summer nights and ghetto fights.
    Rich folk taking first class flights.
    Off to where the sea breeze blows.
    When they come back somebody
    knows. The house may be violated,
    the home invaders are satiated.

    Cops and bounty hunters on short
    fuses. Nobody wins, and the black
    man loses. Covered with abrasions
    and black and blue bruises. Nobody
    knows anything, these cops must
    be using.

    Caught on camera, but they don't
    give a ****. Folks shooting out
    their cars cause they caught in a
    traffic jam. Ice cream melts before
    you can get it to your mouth.
    You ponder and wonder, how you
    ever lived down south.

    It is what it is and one thing that
    we got...
    Is a hot *** summer...
    That is
    BLAZING
    HOT!!!!!!:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo!!!
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms B

    It's been a minute ma...! But im back and reading you...

    Reas
     
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    As Nelly says ITS HOT IN HERRE!!!

    Nice one Ms. B


    Misty
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been purty hot round des heah parts too.

    Melt down in The Burgh.
    Nice flow :)

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    right on!!!!

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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a little late on this one but....

    Girl I gotta give it up 2 snaps and a booty clap :toast:


    girl you ain't never lied ...IT IS HOT :hot: up in here !!!!
    this georgia peach is wilting
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I caint mess with Natasha "2 snaps and a booty clap" I liked it too in consideration that I can so relate, I aint down south but it's still hot in here.
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fellow scribes for feeling the vibe!

    I thank you for reading and I missed you all. They got me jumping like a Mexican jumping bean here in KC...besides the heat they cranking up my work...but it's all good. Just can't get to the PC like I normally would...But, I am back in full force!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:toast:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum

    I had to read this with my cutt offs on, my tank top, while I had my feet in a bucket of cold water, sippin on some lemonade, with the ac on and the fan...... It's 93 here..... They don't call it HOTLANTA for nothing





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