Black Poetry : Blame it on the Rain

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blame it on the rain. I'm not suppose to cry.
    Being a man is hard. Keep a dry eye.
    Let me go outside, when the rain drops fall.
    You can't tell I'm crying. Not me. Not at all.
    But who you think your fooling . I saw my
    father cry. Yes I cried. I guess it's ok. To not always
    have dry eyes. He was still my father. Made him
    no less a man. Don't laugh at me. That would make
    me mad. I have a right. To be sad. Give me just a moment.
    I won't cry for long. I'm expressing my right to care.

    Any loss can be a reason. To express your sad
    refrain. If you need a answer.
    Blame it on the rain. Crying isn't weak.
    For my health, well being and strength.
    It is for a reason. Stand outside. I'm looking up.
    Blaming it on the rain.

    (c) Hodee
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i needed to read somethin' like this today....great scribe...
     
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    this was real, ,,,,real men cry.....good piece...:toast:
     
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    this is a wonderful scribe..express on..very emotional ...let it flow
    Peace
     
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