Khasm13 : blak jack(2 0f 2)

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  1. Khasm13

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    as the fierce rain pelted the ground
    the king of spades looked around
    transfixed by the droning sound
    of the night time shower
    just then he noticed this beautiful flower
    withstanding the destructive rain
    he thought to himself
    little flower
    how can something as beautiful as you maintain
    with massive forces repeatedly
    trying to destroy thee?

    he thought on this throughout the night
    as the rain fell
    with the sick 6's still in his sight
    he now saw the beautiful flowers' might
    and gained tremendous insight
    into his before feeble plight
    as the night turned to day
    through the trees he felt the mornings first sun ray
    and he noticed the flower stand erect with a little sway
    from the morning breeze
    he got up with his heart light
    and his mind at ease
    and thought now it's time to leave...

    no longer did he need an ace
    what he needed was a queen
    for this king to do his thing
    before he forsaked all cards with a face
    the vital flower now showed him that
    thinking like that is a waste
    of time
    he already had the queen in mind
    cause she had been there all along
    through all his pains and his sad songs
    cuter then a baby fawn
    her name is dawn

    her essence is the glue
    though his times that were blue
    he could not see through
    the melancholy veil
    that blinded his sight
    and kept his mind in this internal jail
    before he set off back to his kingdom
    he uprooted the flower
    and put it in his napsack
    and took caution to avoid the burly jacks
    his thoughts were thoughts of clarity
    all the way back
    and it didn't take him long
    so as soon as he got back
    he proposed to dawn
    with flower in hand
    as he told her the story she cried
    then said yes, and excepted him as her man

    a year later

    the kindom was a joyous one
    cause it reflected the royal couple
    and their newborn son...

    his name is ace

    king + queen + ace = blak jack
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm, I love your originality and the way your mind works. You da bomb, brutha.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was an ACE in the hole
    tyte scribe of pure Blackjack
     
  4. Khasm13

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    thanks gempis and rich...
    too much hate surrounding
    this divine union...way too much
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Original and beautiful, just like part 1.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    originality

    i love when you go out
    and come back in
    with a tale
    this was on da money...
    you laid this my brother
    snaps...lovin dat pen..Angel
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks watzin and mzblk...


    united we stand
    divided we fall
    can i get
    a yes yes ya'll?
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree...this is original...i like it alot...
    ~lovely
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks lovely
    i strive to make my points
    in different ways
    everyday :)
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just laced us with a FULL HOUSE !, Man you keep droping the deep Bombs and they will have to hear you!
     
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