Black Poetry : blak-beatitude...lest we ever forget...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Dec 3, 2003.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown::bowdown:....this has got to be one of the BEST....I mean the BEST ........TRINITI omg girl...this was sooo deep
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u have laid here was the foot print of our home
    this be the most touching , moving beautiful worded
    scribe to my eyes .....i love it from heart u hear me !!!
    wow!
    i will savior this scribe within forever .
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:My Queen U are worthy.

    Words can't express the wonderful beauty of this peace piece.

    Excellent!!
     
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    SwtT... my talented young sista...thank you so much for blessing me with such a compliment...but i dont know if i can accept that especially from a queen as skilled as yourself..:) thank you sista
    We are a beautiful people and we must never forget that...we endured so much but we are STILL here :) and uhhh...I aint goin no where :wink:

    $$RICH$$... My brotha your heart to mine and mine to yours...loving our brethren and ourselves is so vital to our survival and with Kings like you claiming our rightful name...it is I who is honored...please believe my brotha :)

    PositiveMindset... My blessed blak king...no I am not worthy of such love you shine on my humble thread but I AM thankful for the blak blood that coarses through my veins and connects me to blak royalty such as yourself...thank you SO much
     
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    when i read the tiltle of your poem i went and brew a cup of tea...so i could fully absord the thoughts of sister Trini...and indeed as i read your flow i was indeed fully absord and marvel at the the story told by you my dear sister Trini..just wonderful wonderful wonderful :)
    Peace
     
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    i'll be back once i screw my head back on...
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    shine my strong black sista
    shine...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    wow lets see
    everyone have just about said everything...
    what you have placed before us...have knocked
    me off my chair..i am speechless i think i should come back
    girl this is wow..... :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    lol i dont know what to say...
    i love this...you laid this....

    Angel
     
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    My Dearest Sister…May I

    Rejoice and be glad, for your reward is great in heaven
    "You are the salt of the earth;…
    "You are the light of the world. A city set on a hill cannot be hid.

    And for you Triniti…don’t ever apologize for the length of your work
    Brevity hath no place in the profundity of an urgent & heavenly message
    So for you…I leave this passage


    Nor do men light a lamp and put it under a bushel, but on a stand, and it gives light to all in the house.


    The beauty of your heart and the words that emanate forth…need not a premise
    This piece speaks for itself!

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    sistah girl, what's up with the headline, cuz you know anything by you I'm gonna read right away. and you know anything that is long means just more for me to love and savor. this is just so
    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    girl I'm in love with your writing. much respect your way.
     
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