Black Poetry : BLACKWOMAN PASSING

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time stood still for one small moment in my life
    As she past, I gasp, Hung over by her light!..............................
    ....Now I know you are thingking Light? Wait Wait, what does he mean....................Well, she had an auora about her...one of those glows..... like in a dream.............................U know that light that makes you remember everything about................This was the thing that made me love from the start,,,, and never doubt it.............. I spoke out fast but No words came into play...................cause at the same time she smiled, and seemed to wipe all the meaning away...........Anxiously I tried one more time, only to release a stutter..............Once again Im wipped by a graceful move.... Man Im melting like butter........ Maybe if I stir real hard she might know what Im trying to say..........I only want to tell her thank you, and how I feel blesse that she's came my way................I would love to let this women know that she has this power.....................Im thinking Ive been lied to, it wasn't April it was her that brought May flowers.......The feeling she leaving me with its making more than that start to grow......... Like my invisions of her in my future, she got me thinking about a family... WHOA!!!!!
    The character of this women and the charisma she brings......... Im committed, and I dont even know my ladies name................Lady Grace, Ms Melodious, Pure beauty, some titles she could surely receive.........Im gonna give her a special title and just call her "BELIEVE"................. Just by passsing by you made me BELIEVE in a thing called love............I only believed in the white ones, now I know theres a black dove....... You are like know other, beautiful and so unique............. There's something about a Black womens auora thats leaves a mesmorizing mystique.................BELIEVE......BELIEVE........................Thats all people use to tell me, but black woman when you passed for the first time my heart yelled it at me................................


    Copyrighted by: J. Plummer
    By: Lj
     
  2. PurpleMoons

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    Your emotions are
    beautifully displayed
    hear in your words! It
    has an enchanting
    rhythm that floats
    you from the beginning
    to the end.
    Beautyful scribe!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wow
    like a story likes my brother...
    i was all in it....
    thanks for sharing this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks PURPLEMOONS, mzblkangel, greatly appreciated, thnks for the read, your attention is priceless,
     
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    This was so refreshing because it's so good to know that a man can see a beautiful black sister for all her worth's....and their elavator DOWN don't come UP. She must have been a ..........TREASURE TO BEHOLD....
     
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    WoW!!!

    Simply ~BEAUTIFUL~
    THEONE,
    You really let your light shine in this piece. One of the reasons I love reading your work is for the beauty you seem to capture. Lovin this totally THEONE :spin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    two words AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
     
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    tight tight tight!!!! lovin the structure, too. dang
     
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    So beautiful and eloquently written, I was just shaking my head and smiling all the way through, because this makes a black woman feel adored. Bravo!!!
     
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    wow..
    i could feel the energy vibing
    through the lines
    in your flow
    flow on poet
    wonderful poem
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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