Black Poetry : Blacksoul can I?

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blacksoul it's been a year that we have become the best of friends
    And you have been to me someone whom I can depend
    On
    You taught me to remain strong

    Even when I feel the world has treated me unfair
    As time has gone by my mind has had many affairs

    With you
    Even thinking about what would you do

    If I came to see you for the first time
    Would we celebrate our friendship with a innocent glass of wine

    As I playfully with my eyes let you know how I feel
    Everytime we talk I feel as if what we shared is real

    You understand me for the Queen you say I am
    I thank you Love for giving a [email protected]

    About me when you
    Shouldn't

    Believe me I thank the Lord for sending you my way
    I think about you whether you know it each and every day
    The things you say

    To me
    Completes me
    Blacksoul you move me

    To get closer to the man who I came to know and love
    If I could just touch you
    The love I would give you would come from above

    Love so many times I wrestled with my feelings
    The more we talk, the more I go revealing
    My feelings

    But you never reveal how you feel
    for fear you will betray the one your with
    Fighting my urges, my passions in an open pit

    If I was to see you
    I know what the first thing I would do
    I would kiss you
    And tell you your're the one
    Thank you for being the sun

    That warms in the day and through the night
    Blacksoul you have been my source of light

    When darkness, and depression had set in
    And like a true friend

    You come to save the day
    And if we wasn't so far apart you would come around my way

    To save the Queen
    I would turn to my King
    With so much passion in my eyes to say

    "Blacksoul can I love you?"


    Copyright 2007
    Nevar


    This is dedicated to the my friend Blacksoul love ya boy!
    :kiss2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very true and warm to that special one ........
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich for showing me some love! i think he would be very surprised that i put him out here like this. a true friend you wouldn't mind telling the whole world about.
     
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    When he reads this, he'll probably have a smile similiar to that green smiley you used above. Affectionately written.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know he will have that smile to last for eternity! thanks watz
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW THAT WAS JUST WOW I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY JUST THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME FELL SPECIAL FOR A DAY. LATER MY QUEEN.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh thanks just wanted to let you know you are appreciated my love!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i can just see you two together kissing and stuff nice post I must captialize on this one for real
     
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