Black Poetry : Blackness

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  1. islander

    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is about my King.


    Blackness


    Blackness....brown-ess...
    Your blackness surrounds my brown and covers me like a total eclipse when we're joined at the hip
    Your blackness has me under duress
    Professing and confessing my sins to all who will listen
    Manifesting visions of the different positions that we're engaged in...
    D**n near engraving his frame in my brown skin

    As we lay, smothered in each other...
    Enveloped in ethereal ecstasy and shielding our eyes from the afterglow, I ask myself...
    How did we get to this point of no return?
    Yearning for no other but each other to the point where our body and signs entwine to find the perfect Zodiac match

    Thinking back to when we first crossed paths....both...unattentive
    Never knowing the possibility of revisiting love and unwilling to take the chance...
    Then, we danced...
    Which enhanced the attraction
    And ended up being the key in the ignition in the beginning of what would be...
    I'm not one for pork or beef...but I definitely don't mind dabbling in a little dark meat

    Hmmm, how sweet Blackness is
    I like to let it tickle the tip of my tongue...
    And I like how you know the positions to make me come...
    And I like how you rub my back when we're done
    Just to give yourself ample time to reload the gun
    I want some...Blackness
    I like how you want to give me the best...
    I like the look on your face when I wear that dress...
    And I especially like the other look you get when it's lying sloppily at the foot of bed...
    Right next to those Victoria's that are soaking wet...

    Now the secret's out
    Round about south where your head is...
    Oops! Pardon me, Blackness, about my slackness with our business
    It's just that most women don't get a chance to experience something such as this and I just want to share it

    Since we met, you've orchestrated every beat of my heart and I didn't even know it
    I used every excuse in the book to run from it...
    But now that denial has loosened its grip...I embrace it
    I embrace you and everything you have to give
    Love will live as long as we keep a home for it
    Now I choose to adore it rather than ignore it...
    I adore you...

    Je t'aime, noirceur, et je n'ai plus peur pour l'exprimer vous...
    I love you, Blackness, and I'm no longer afraid to express it to you
    Now that I've said it to you...
    Are you ready for round two?

    Copyrighted by Tamara Al-Rashid 2002
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Je t'aime, noirceur, et je n'ai plus peur pour l'exprimer vous... "

    BEAUTIFUL...
    beauty by any other name is still founded in BLAK love :)
     
  5. islander

    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for showing love. Much appreciated.
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love for this...it was just off the hook...very tight.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm, this was smooth from beginning to end,
    nice flow
     
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