Black Poetry : blackberry molassess

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    baby almost lost her footing as her stilehetto hill
    got stuck in the thickness of her blackberry molassess
    but that was a while before they shamed u
    by making u cover up your rumpkins
    as being opposed to being proud of your fat assess
    by calling u mammies and pick-a-nanies
    while pickin at your panties
    and forcing u to wear your ugliness on your sleeve
    claiming your ilk was produced with pure vanity

    oooh how your inner beauty grived
    for the their words that your heart had belived
    and namin your intellect as out and out sassiness
    but now

    i---welcome you to come out the masses
    as u--u commerate your woman-hood
    by celebrating your blackness
    and lawd knows u couldn't do it alone
    with out your kings having your backs and
    i ain't talking bout the pimps tha playas or the macks .....man
    i'm speaking
    solely
    of the many strong ***-black men
    that'll ride with with u and not for u
    that'll shift with u to still adore
    tha'll dig in u when he get's horny
    i'm talking bout them brothers thats less concerned
    wit them

    twenty inch wheels spinnin right
    that'll flip them burgers for five-fifty alright....
    so that our babies could eat well balanced meals at night

    i'm talikng bout
    the ones that be wiping pipe dreams
    from the eyes of crak fiends

    could it be..

    could it be that the ballers at the end of my block
    could momentarily put down their glocks
    and stop-shoving-thier-***** down the throats
    of our young daughters
    and spoon feed them with just 1 quarter
    of the knowledge, that you've gained
    that has helped you maintain
    weekly,


    like...
    replacing gangsta leans
    with blank stares and wheel chairs
    and school days & old age with cold graves
    cause he produced a lil more baby than you've just made
    shiiiit
    he yo nephew yo brother and yo son
    look at the price of the attention that he just paid
    cause not being asked never un-made
    you a role model
    2 hundred dollars a pop for cris by the bottle
    but dummy you got a bounty on yo head
    for boppin to da tune of a beat of daddy that's dead

    but you figure
    why bother
    so you stay steady mobbin or switchin ya jobs up
    insteada giving shorty
    your most precious gift of them all
    like...
    giving soma ya time up
    befor he, or me, or she
    be pickin him
    Outta Police Line Ups

    please.
    donnnt get me started on this end of the broken home tip
    i felt sorry for the first time you turned a trick
    but now it's time to really grind
    and get off ya *** miss
    open a book and at least read a story to ya daughter
    and stop...lettin her heel toe and harlem
    shake it up for quarters
    take long looook at the limb that you hang from
    looks a lot like her twig cause its **** near the same one
    ma she replica
    nearly your clone
    quit looking for place to counter the blame from
    stop actin like you don't know
    "that all this **** doesn't just stem :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: from,
    what we first plant at home" ........hookup
     
  2. freedom Song

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    Bravo Bravo Encore Encore

    Ayyo cat daddy Don't stop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u manifested a story within a flow of a story that rivers out
    like a cascading rapture the motion is in place here dis was mad tyte
    and got me thinking .
     
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    Vavoom…. :hot:
    This piece had speeeeeeeeed…
    the agility and grace of an import…
    :spinstar: :spinstar:With a dose of adrenaline :spinstar: :spinstar:
    Whew…what a ride :pool:
    ~Eyes wide open...~
    The kind of stuff legends are made of
    You stripped, ripped and re-painted
    The interior of this forum with
    This spoken word joynt…
    Love what you’re doing with our
    Mental and Social… décor….

    Keep wheeling it poet…
    I’m loving the ride…
    ~Sage~

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    Hard to say what I like the most about this piece. Of course there is the message that goes there and then some, in a check out your own backyard kind of way. Then there's the rhythm and flow of it, just when it seemed like the piece was ending, you actually got a second wind. Flow on then.
     
  6. Nisa

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    There..isnt too much i can say over here....that was soooo on target, so eleoquant..thought provoking, stimulating peice of poetry..i felt that down to my bone to my toes
     
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    I can onlee give props where props are due brotha
    your voice is a midnight cry to awaken and it is welcome
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  8. THA HOOKUPMAN

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    respose to the test

    I had to bring it back.
    It's a hot drop.
     
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