Black Poetry : Black

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mahoganyqueen, Nov 10, 2004.

  1. mahoganyqueen

    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black

    Black is velvet smooth
    Blending with the dark surroundings
    Black is the color of your slightly portruding bottom lip
    That tastes like licorice
    Black is your eyes when they look into mine
    Sharing some wonderful secret
    Black is your smooth skin
    That leaves a print on mine
    Black
    Black
    Black
    Beautiful, beautiful black
    Black is the color of the rose that represents our Love
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is tight girl like this drop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blackness of beauty
    the sweep of love
    darken sweetness
    this was so butter smooth
    tyte drop
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    embracing this flow..very smooth and enjoyable
    thanikis for sharing...Peace
    Angel
     
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    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to everyone who responded to my poem. Thanks for the positive feedack. :hearts2:
     
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    short simple and to the point
    beautiful
    beautiful
    beautiful
    BLAK
    I love it :)
    i wrote a piece with a similar concept :)
    :read: :toast: :read: :)
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes...she did and hit it right outta the park...

    "We feel you on this piece"...

    Simply stated...Powerfully felt...


    Oneluv,
    Sage
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We can't be reminded often enough, of how beautiful Black is. Thank you for this poet.
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful black
    amen to that
     
  10. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black is Beautiful. I was feeling the melanin of this poem.

    *Black Power* *puts on afro wig* *raising a fist* Fight the power that be !!
    Sing it loud, I'm black and I'm proud *dancin like james brown*
     
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