Black Poetry : black

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Feb 20, 2003.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the thunder
    my heart speaks
    to your eyes full of curiosity
    you blinded
    by my erotic tendencies
    want to taste
    and my color is so plain to see
    as you come closer to me

    like the racism i feel everyday
    interracially
    alienated yet proud of who I am
    I know your passions won't subside
    and it's ok
    because i've tried

    so come into me
    I know you're waiting impatiently
    touch and feel and taste what you see
    the secrets told
    of my legacy

    black beautiful queens
    in our glory
    in my temple
    as deep as the sea
    unfortold
    are the passions
    that drive you so wild within yourself
    yet nothing is hidden from me
    we know you would die
    to be clothed in black
    ethiopian
    africana
    egyptian
    dreams
    ......
     
  2. OLMEC

    OLMEC Active Member MEMBER

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    Dog!

    Sometimes it feels like the whole planet is vibin on the same thing....Like I'm vibin on this poem as if I wrote the mf myself....

    Holla back
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa ........dis took off and took me with it
    i really felt it still vibing off it nice scribe u vibe here..
     
  4. Sista Steele

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    I'm lovin this flow. Beautifully written Desert Storm.
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    Oh Snap!

    you go girl!

    nice flow :toast:

    peace

    poeticd

    :)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS

    You blowin me away with ya art sis!!! lovin it!!!

    Reas
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya brothas and sistas! fo enjoying dis piece.... i'm glad you enjoyed reading it
     
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    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DStorm

    I see you still inspiring us with your flows of blak beauty...lovin this vibe...your spirit.

    Great to be back and read you again.

    Aminata
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really love your flow you are great continue the good work, you are very powerful, continue to teach.
     
  10. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great flow Desert Storm.
    Vivid mind pictures.

    *Emma*
     
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