Black Poetry : Black Sands of ..............Paradise

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black sands of paradise

    Love found....

    He took me in his arms…..
    Folding me in
    ………… protecting my heart…

    Our souls meeting
    on the
    ………….. midnight moon

    Riding on…

    The sea of love… As
    Our bodies
    ……………connect
    with the stars in the sky

    We floated
    …………..upon
    A cloud.......
    as we made it home

    Mental tease of
    an old fashion romance
    Dancing
    in
    the
    heavens…. :love:

    Thirsting for
    him……..
    Him thirsting for
    me…..


    Black sands of paradise

    Love found

    The touch of his soul in mine
    As his spirit pulls me…
    Just…..
    Over
    ……and
    ………over
    …………………again…

    Following in motion
    As we go
    ........... higher

    Ocean dive..

    A fantasy ride….

    Taking us to our universal


    Where true pleasure only
    Reside…
    Inside the treasure
    Of
    Me
    Him
    We
    Us
    As one…..

    Black sands of paradise
    Sweet whispers
    Blue pearl
    Moonrise
    Ruby of love…
    A diamond set…..
    With out flaws…
    Moments in
    we hit......
    ...........Heaven's doors
    as we enter
    In
    The
    …………Black
    Sands
    Of
    ………Paradise


    :heart: :blush: :heart:
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The black sands of paradise...sounds so good to me...I closed my eyes and ran to the stars and the moon...*smh* ...had to fantasize for a minute myself. this was beautiful...loved it a lot.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sands of black love this was awesome creativity
    loved it flow on sistah
     
  4. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This did the ancestors proud. Superbly crafted, in a "Black is Beautiful" way.

    Nuff Respect my SistaQueen :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  5. Nita

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    MBA

    Black sands....Blue pearls...wow what creativity sis...lovin this one totally! :D
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop sister loving the way you posed this scribe :driveby:
     
  7. caramelpython

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    I have to admit this is a great drop :spinn: . I love the creative expression and the visual you painted :coffee:
     
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    There was a poetic calm and ease in this vision. Enjoyed the flow of it.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana...glad ya enjoyed ya poetic trip in the black sands of paradise
    thanks for the love on dis sis.... :D

    $$RICH$$.indeed the black sands of paradise glad you enjoyed ya self here
    you come back now ya hur...lol :D thanks :spinn:

    afrostotle..QQ is dat really u...lol glad to read you thanks for humbling with your support and love myy brother :D

    Nita...thank you my sis your lovin support is great... :coffee:

    THEONE...well i am glad ya loving it thanks my brother you be droppin some stuff to know :D

    caramelpython....u :flirt:ing wit me always makin a sistah :blush: and :D ..smh :kiss: thanks for all the love and support :spinn:

    watzinaname....happy you enjoyed my poetic vision of black love...aint nothing like it.... thanks for all the support ya give.... :coffee:

    Peace and Love my fam
    Angel
     
  10. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: Oh sis are you island breed? Looks like dexter St. Jock has you hooked on some island of love. Beautiful poetry :luvv:
     
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