Quiet Poetry Lounge : Black Rose

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 4, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Petals of black
    Feels of satin
    Untouched….
    Lay to wither
    In da sun…
    Places a dream
    Of fantasy….
    Within…
    But the metal
    around its frame
    They don’t pick
    da black rose
    color not as bright..
    so many misses the
    light within the black rose....
    for its filled with
    Love as it lays
    within the garden
    Comfort of touch
    And hope for all
    But they fail to
    take a look
    For it’s a
    black rose
    Not the
    same as you….
    black rose….
     
  2. black rose

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    beautiful and very well in depth for the understanding of the mind's eye
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this is very beautiful
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    much love to da black rose of depth and essence
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some fail to see the obvious beauty in something that is deemed different. I love the visuals in this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam

    rare-nest of a black rose is the
    bare-nest of ones heart...
    define the inside not the out side
    you can never go wrong..
    if you look inside the black rose...
    the rose of mystery
     
  7. PositiveMindset

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    I can feel this.

    If U close your eyes, a black rose is just as fragrant as a red or white.

    Very nice.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset....thankz....
    black rose is just as fragrant, blooms,
    and vibes as the rest...but they no willing
    to look in....to see the beauty...for the
    color not as bright...
     
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