Black Poetry : BLACK PETALS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Sep 1, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow..great piece poet..three:great: claps and a:spinstar:
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE QUEEN HAS SPOKEN, THANK YOU FOR CHECKIN THIS FLO APPRECIATE IT


    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the sentiments voiced in this poem are very tru...
    it's a lesson that most of us have to learn the hard way...
    great write...

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BROTHA KHASM I GIVE YOU THANKS FOR CHECKIN OUT THIS FLO


    SWEETTEE29,LOVE
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BRAVO

    peace

    Patrice
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PATRICECQUEEN

    THANK YOU


    SWEETTEE29,LOVE
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweettee:
    The is such an "AWESOME" piece.
    Im no pro but I think your writing is
    just evolving. You have been posting
    some really nice writes. Keep flowing it
    with yo bad self.:)

    Much luv to you.
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes yes yes

    poet
    the heart and emotion do way heavy on a person sometimes voiding common sense

    i think we've all been thru this

    and your last line is so so on point at some point sense has to rule but it's so hard

    good piece poet i felt it
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EVERLUV GIRL I APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT YOU REALLY LIFT A SISTAH UP GIRL AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLIMENT ON MY WRITING THAT REALLY MEANS ALOT
    DA STREET SO'JA BROTHA I ALSO THANK YOU FOR THE POETIC LOVE THIS IS MY REALITY THANK YOU

    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
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