Black Poetry : Black Pearl

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  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Black Pearl

    I couldn’t believe I had it all
    And suddenly…one day…I hit a wall

    Love lost...tongue tied
    Feelings frail…I cried

    Wanting you deep in my soul
    Emotions running out of control

    Fear caused sweat dripping from my brow
    Worried my heart beat would stop anytime now

    Losing sleep in wondering thought
    Many phone calls all for naught

    A dull pain comes over my soul
    Chaos-laced fate imprinted on my life’s scroll

    Then waltzed into my life heavenly peace
    My personal hell this woman had to release

    She made my insanity sane
    And, made my complex world plain

    She un-crippled my crippled soul
    She took the pieces of me and made me whole

    She caressed my heart with her fingertips
    She massaged my mind with just one kiss of her lips

    To my spirit, she brought me calm
    And my body, she kept from harm

    She loved my body down to my toes
    She eased my nerves and took away my woes

    And for this, I’d give her the world
    For she is my precious Black Pearl

    By Monetary
     
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    wow!!!!
    this was wow..lol
    i am speechless
    you posed this so well
    wonderful drop

    I likes this flow got me all emotional over here.....
    this was good my brother very good

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she always da essence of ya heart
    tyte scribing brutha
    ya laid dis one on da moneyyyyy!!!!!
    flow head on poet
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thank you, sweetheart. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :D
     
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    Thank you, bruh...dapz. :D
     
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    This was deep! Truly felt! Thanks for sharing.
     
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    OH WOW

    I'm in awe...of the "power" of this woman...
    this was an incrediblly emotive scribe
    the way you express the completeness
    she brought to you...was masterful
    Let it flow...Brother...Let it flow :bowdown:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    THANK YOU...

    Ujima and Angelicsage. :D
     
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    Feeling this emotional piece...very well posed.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    THANK YOU...

    Cindy and Watz....I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
     
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