Black Poetry : BLACK ON BLACK CRIME #1

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLACK ON BLACK CRIME #1

    Concerned over the skies I turn my eyes to look at pictures
    Shook by scriptures in the **** hood, ramb stood in mixtures
    Of colors, new phase my brothers, I and the ramb gazed at
    Each other like cat and dog and then this fat fog was spat
    From the mouth of a cloud realized I’m from the south and proud
    Lamb said “stay and remain two can play this game then a crowd
    Of people gathered around, now a Christ knife falls in my hand from
    The sky, felt like the Highlander knife was a lightning blade I was
    Frightened and afraid grabbed my horse looked at the saddle cuz
    Shooked ready for battle, the ramb represented black on black crime
    And now it was attack time its horn long he was born strong and divine
    Its eyes was red fire it was sweaty and ready to endure a pure battle
    It had a stare of death and hate now it looks at my breast plate I’m rattled
    And pissed why do this exist? I asked myself this task is deft I have to kill
    The ramb to defeat the times of street crimes, tension really started to build
    Now my horse sprout wings no doubt my bling is tucked in couldn’t duck
    The winds of battle now straddle the saddle and my horse take off this
    Will be a great cost if my fate is lost my vocab pure but I mus abjure my brisk
    Street ways or this could be a complete grave for me this is family Matters
    Like Urkel my horse scater his wings and circles the ramb as the dust scatters
    The beast awaits no peace just hates, must end this violence now the wind
    Silence
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....brother this gotta be one of your tops you came with it from awareness points
    had me standing up i str8 up bow to this joint ya pen flaming bruh !
    speak on rhymebad
     
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    impressed!!!!!

    now this story I could see clearly ....

    and the ending very calming and settling...

    by far ... by far.. by far

    In my humble opinion...

    ur best work...

    storytellin... on point!!!!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks for the props yall after reading calling my kings to the throne by asimplepoet it gave me ideas my mind went hay wire and this is what I come up with HA! HA! HA!
     
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    you was on point and drop some dope stuff dat make me stand up

    man i have to bow to your pen and mind of creation fo real
     
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    definately one of your more greater and wiser pieces...

    very impressed
     
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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ON EFOR REAL YALL HAD TO DO THIS WOW!
     
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    TOO MUCH...

    BLACK on BLACK crime. TOO many of our people killing their own kind...thinking, "gotta get mine"...but is this the time to be SELFISH.

    continue the flow
     
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    This Peace Piece was not only music to my ears..but also food for my soul...I really feel this..One key to decreasing Blk on Blk violence is from neighborhood to neighborhood putting and end to Blk on Blk silence...Speak Rhymebad Speak....

    Peace
     
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    REALLY GOTTA GIVE PROPS ON THSI ONE FOR REAL YALL
     
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