Black Poetry : Black n Blue

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 3, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She hangs,
    suspended from the pendulum
    of her own heart strings
    defying the pull of love
    yet
    like a magnet, the force
    is more than she can bear

    feeling pleasing rhythms
    ~everywhere~

    and nature does it’s
    thing
    as she sits upon that
    swing

    imagine her burning
    between smooth thighs

    while needing another
    lover’s eyes

    ...and heart & soul
    ...and arms
    ...and lips

    but giving pleasure
    from her hips

    to the one who’s nearest

    not the love who’s dearest

    her heart shall know no rest

    when she can’t touch the best

    flowing endlessly between
    the two
    her soul bruised,
    black and blue

    streams of his white hot
    joy is what she craves

    so,
    inside her soul
    is where she saves

    the deepest, sweetest
    part
    for the one who owns
    her heart


    Alyce, 2000
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cindeeeee, smile!

    you shed tears for me in vain (this time), my dearest....this one was written for a sistah/friend who's TORMENTED betwixt&between. :wink:

    XOX

    A
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...inside her soul is where she saves" dayum! Alyce that line was heavy. The piece was nice, but, that line was heavy. thanx fro the read.

    one love, blak
     
  4. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at what depth do we begin to measure the love of a woman...
    ...as for me, i cannot fathom the complexities of
    emotions that comprise the wonderful gift that GOD has
    bestowed upon us that is she...may her worthiness, even in
    the sorrow of an unrequited love, never be diminished....
    and may your words, light the way back from the darkest of
    depths, to show that somewhere, even when we least expect
    it....THERE IS LIGHT!
    beautiful piece my WORDLY QUEEN....thanx for the read

    Saaroncrowell
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce....I can resist this one......

    Though you may be with another
    Your heart longs for your true lover
    though separated in the physical
    you are bound together in the spiritual
    you give yourself to another, but your soul cannot delight
    until you can join yourself with he known as the Knight of Nights.
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Sister... My Sister... !!!!!

    ALYCE...

    this peace... to borrow your terminology...
    spoke volumes... & i am shynin' all ova it!!

    you my sister are a Queen among Queens!

    thank you for this... :)

    MuchLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY ALYCE DES BE HEAVY AND HEART FELT
    THESE LINE U POSED MY EYES R WATERED UP!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Sorry I missed this flow earlier!!!

    It is slammin' like that!!!

    Exquisite!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ME?? Mistress of da stroke??

    I think not gurlfriend!! Only if your pen was broke!!

    This one burned my right thigh!

    *3rd-degree*
     
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