Black Poetry : black man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, Jun 3, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    black man

    Black man
    coffee bean complection,
    eyes dark, and mysterious,
    lips pale purple and chapped.

    Black man
    ashy knuckles rough and jagged,
    widen shoulders strong as an ox,
    nappy afro.

    Black man
    full figured mind,
    eyes that never lie,
    a black man in disguise.

    Black man
    loves his woman more than anything,
    hates to be put last,
    top of society,
    black man black man black man, an angel in gods eyes!!!!!!!

    this is dedicated to: my daddy

    moral of this poem:
    this is how i describe my dad and in my eyes my daddy is "the true black man" my hero!!!!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: to your father :) that dedication was sweet and the scribe was good
     
  3. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanxs yah sistah glad to know u was feelin my werds!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow of respect to one's Father
    loved dis here
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sure ya daddy is proud he raised a prolific writer like ya self :)
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall all so much glad to know yah like my verse ;)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wonderful...a great tribute to you father...
     
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    :love: father, the hero, the king, the black man reigns!
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall alot:)
     
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