Black Poetry : Black Magic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by realrawism, Jan 25, 2004.

  1. realrawism

    realrawism Active Member MEMBER

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    Black magic
    show me your spell,
    Grip my anger and toss it to hell.
    Queen my actions and King my claims,
    to ancestry bones and unspoken names.
    Black Magic
    sip my blood and release it's paint
    illustrate the trail when the page is blank.
    Attack my ill-acts and cover them, with will-wax,
    Laminate my hate, mix it with my great.........ness.
    Display my life on the learning wall of clay.
    Black Magic
    Can I meet Yemaya?
    Can I face the fire?
    Show me the difference between love and desire.
    Rub my back
    use my skin
    to heal my mind
    and understand
    my sins.
    Black Magic
    Who is she? Keep her form.........less
    let my love & respect earn her shape.
    Kiss my seeds
    as I train their minds to fear no......thing
    but embrace what is divine!
    Touch my fist,
    My I strike only in self - defense
    Black Magic
    Symbolic mist, winding moves
    smelt my energy for others to use.
    I'm ready for the journey,
    navigating from the womb, smiling, no regets
    as I look to the Moon!
    Black Magic!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love dis drop here the way it flowed
    very nice
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I especially liked these lines:
    Queen my actions and King my claims,
    to ancestry bones and unspoken names.

    Keep flowing.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "WOW"

    ...mmm, mmm, mmm
    ....the irresistable
    ...MAGI NOIRE
    the imagery, trancelike
    state, and swift undertow
    of "spell like " questions
    posed in quest of the
    mysterious "love"...
    was absolutely
    "wonderful"...

    I loved every word!
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a good poem. The ancient Egyptians felt magic was the key to inner knowledge of science.

    O
    O
    O
    ^
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!!! now that's how you make an entry!!! Feeling ya spirit ndeed. Marvelous.

    blak
     
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