Black Poetry : Black Love

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Black Love"


    She whispered


    She told me, I have been watching you


    I see you come, I see you go


    Yes, I have been watching you


    Flashing smiles


    Who can you trust?


    I ask you this, because I know you


    This is Black Love.


    You continue to get ready


    When the door opens you go thru


    I know you will


    I have confidence in you


    Put your hand to it, I have seen you work


    Creating much out of nothing


    You’re not done yet
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    I was getting nervous


    She was making me sweat


    She wasn’t even close


    Just next to me


    So sweet, I know we just now met


    She told me she was watching, she reached out and touch my hand


    No one had ever rocked me such, it is hard for me to stand
    ============


    I feel so drunk, I haven’t drank


    Intoxicated I am


    It’s her, I never felt like this she makes me feel the man


    She leaned in closer


    Whispered, "it’s not a dream"


    Composure still in check
    ===========


    Her lips were barely touching


    Her breath was on my neck


    She whispered


    “I told you, I have been watching you”


    "I chose you"


    I see you come and go


    Today it’s real
    =========


    I want to share and tell you something you should know


    Her lips came just to my ear


    I’m nervous and I’m scared


    I have never experienced this kind of thing


    Electricity in the air
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    Then she spoke and said to me


    “are you ready for this ride”


    I am "Black Love" and you are Too


    Coming now, to be by your side
     
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  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE, you took me there. gotta love that black love, man. there's nothing like the passion...the strength...the tug and pull...the give and take. it's...it's...Black Love.:)

    THANKS for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The power of Black love is like sweet romance dancing in pure hearts man the grasp of it
    brings a Black love hush !!! awesome write HODEE
     
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    Chidike Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful post! Keep it up!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, this was like two halves meant for each other, drawn together
    like heated magnets... an undeniable power of passionate black love!!

    I enjoyed every bit of it!!

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco :dance:
     
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