Black Poetry : Black little girl, Do'nt Cry!

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  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :( Black Little Girl, Do'nt Cry!

    She felt the tears rush to join the others as her body rid itself of the inflicted pain of his words, shaking in convulsions, she felt as a child.
    Where was the arms of long ago that would now come and comfort her, how could she stop the tears that threatened to choke her, sobs of despair was claiming her and she felt like curling up in its furious fold.
    Escape was lost in the shudder of her soul as she crawled against the floor, hope was gone and so was she.
    She was a child again.
    Tears of childish screams echoed throughout the soul, to rest and feed on the grown body of the woman of old.
    Why the cut, felt like a knife, why could he be so cold.
    Colder than ice, the blade of his words sending razor sharp slits across her heart.
    Heart full of love sliced and killed will always send the body into a trauma of life unknown, be strong my heart, and i will heal you myself, and i will hardened you against the killer of the knife wounds dipped in words, hold the child against your heart, she is there to console you, what you say heart, but i am a woman of old, heart says you are the woman the child wanted to be, hold her against your breast, feel the soft thud of her heart, silence will stop the ***** of the knife and she will dry your tears.
    And the woman will say, Black little girl dont cry.
    Come here.:heart:
     
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    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Skills you truly own.
    Your way with words are commended.
    I like this.
     
  3. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you LoveAll20, I take that as a complement coming from you.
    continue to flow girl!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte piece nicely posed
     
  5. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My revelation is to empty myself of all that is overtaking me.
    The pen is my friend, and thoughts are my lover.
     
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    Hey sister I believe this was the poem you were looking for...

    after reading your post in da relationship forum...my heart really cries out for your personal journey...

    *sigh* :grouphug: I pray for your healing your strength and your peace :heart:
     
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    you have already taken the hardest step sis...i pray for your continued strength for you and your children...it's a tru shame that some cannot maintain their own self worth without putting someone else down...smh...this was a powerful heartfelt scribe...take care

    one love
    khasm
     
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    feeling all your pain within and the depth of ya soul
    hold on to Gods unchange hand .........................
    a new day ahead
     
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    feeling the pain in this the heartache...not knowing whats to come but the first step have been taken...continue to let the pen be your friend and release
    Angel
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just love when I can feel what the writer feels. I love the emotion in this piece. It was so in my face that I had no choice but to accept it and read on. Great piece!
     
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