Black Poetry : BLACK HALLS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I CAN'T SEE!
    WHERE AM I GOING?
    TURN ON THE LIGHTS
    THESE HALLS R SLIPPERY
    DARK IN HERE
    WHERE AM I!?
    WHATS IN FRONT OF ME
    WHO WILL BE AT THE END?
    I HEAR SOMETHING BUT I CAN'T SEE
    SO DARK SO WET SO LONG SO FAR TO GO
    THESE DARK BLACK HALLS
    GETTING CLOSER AND CLOSER
    WHO'S THAT I HEAR WHISPERING?
    WHATS THAT SMELL
    SOMEONE TOUCHING ME
    O~MY~GOD I'M SWEATING
    SO HOT
    THE DOORS R CLOSING UP
    THINGS GETTING TIGHTER
    MY HEART BEATING FASTER
    I'M FALLING SLIPPING
    ITS PULLING ME SOMEWHERE
    HELP ME!!!!!!PLEASE.
    I CAN'T SEE
    WHERE AM I?????
    WHATS THAT I BUMPED INTO
    SO DARK SO DEEP SO HOT IN HERE
    TURN ON THE LIGHTS
    I CAN'T TALK
    MY MIND IN A FAZE
    RUNNING ME THROUGH A MAZE
    TURN HERE TURN THERE LEFT/RIGHT
    UP/DOWN ~~~FORWARD/BACKWARDS
    WHERE AM I
    SO DARK
    SIDE 2 SIDE
    WHERE AM I???
    STOP!
    HELP ME..
    WAITING IN LINE
    SOMETHING MOVING ME
    PUSH
    WHERE AM I??????
    SOMETHING HOLDING ME
    I'M AT A HUSH/HUSH
    WHERE AM I????????
    HELP
    HELP
    H~E~L~PPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My $$RICHNE$$...

    okay... okay... okay!!
    you told me about this
    one... i'm not even
    gonna guess... imma just
    sit back & peep the
    responses of the others!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YEAP! ITS HOT & COLD SO DARK I'M LOST
    HELP ME !
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    here I go with my "love shades" on..................

    I guess it could be that you are in "Love"....
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cool stuff

    see this is what i'm talking about:

    ART

    good piece man
     
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    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich seem like ya in a hole
    and cant get up! or maybe u r
    lost in cyberspace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    8th i am in love yet i am lost in the halls of
    darkness and its so wet ......where am i ??
    help meeeeee!!


    thanx so'ja i'm just lost in somewhere


    honey i'm lost in the spread of walls
    yet they r wet ...help me ...so dark
    its cold somebody holding me where am i!??
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (pEEP)

    **** LOVING THIS RICH YOU KEEP ON REPPING WATHOUT FOR THE DARK HALLWAYS HA! HA!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm... YOU SOMEWHERE! DAT'S FA SHO!

    Yea,Keep reppin like Madd said,WEll you sure as heck somewhere! Very passionate piece. It's a pleasure everytime I read ya. I was peepin this one fa sho
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY MADD!!
    MAN ITS SO DARK I'M SLIPPIN AND REPPIN
    TO PERFECTION AND I'M SCARED WHERE AM I !??
    HELPPPPPP!!

    D~STORM YES I AM SOMEWHERE BUT WHERE
    I AM LOST SO WET SO DARK THE WALLS R
    CLOSING IN THE END IS SO FAR THIS PLACE
    WOOOOOOH! WHATS THAT!....HELP ME WHERE AM I...
     
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