Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 28, 2001.
Born from the black
poetry & songs
voiced in rythem
This is nice, you amaze me everytime.
Rich...This Is Rich
This is simply beautiful. You wrote artistically into my soul.
Haiku is like a painting on a canvas. The poem itself is the painting and the heart is the canvas. You painted this one as beautiful as a sunny morning.
Haiku requires some thought, using 17 syllables or less. I can see that your thoughts came together beautifully.
Though Haiku is small, it can pack a more powerful punch at times, than longer poems. Moreover, the more one writes Haiku, the better they become at writing poetry period, be it long or short. There's just something about the "depth effect" of it.
Hence, I am looking forward to seeing more from you in the NEAR future. I must warn you though...keep a writing pad in the car. Haikus have a funny way of visiting you while you sit at a traffic light. Haiku can become addictive. I'm hooked and don't won't help *smile*.
Thank you so much for writing this for me, Rich...I Haiku You.
SEXE1..............THANK U SO MUCH A MILLION TYMES
JOYCE.......Ya most welcome my Haiku Queen
surely u will see me like the writting on da wall.
ya know wit my pen i see and hear as i watch
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