Black Poetry : Black Guns

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I represent those in the struggle trying to hold it down in the underground.
    All is not lost, nor shall be forgotten.
    My hands still bleed from ancestor’s picken cotton.
    I followed the hawk and his trail in the sky.
    He showed me a vision how my people would die.
    On the Mississippi banks I saw 50,000 strong.
    The 54th regiment chanting, "ring the alarm".
    The brave and the strong were gilded in white light.
    The noble, for freedom they would fight.
    A Humbling sight as any could see, were freedom fighters of 1863. As I turned my back, I dare not look back, the word "freedom" sounded like thunder in a storm.
    In one moment the revolution was reborn.
    (c)MRKS
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice the revolution will not be televised nice piece but let me drop this here

    My job is to slaughter and dissolve weak cats in water

    Like Alka-seltzer then drink these weak stats that falter

    Yummy in my tummy they go so you stay below me

    Rushes on the block waters gushes from a rock see

    So pure and crystalline secure with my pistol a brisk nine

    Got a list of fine females on my rolodex I have sex and kiss sometime

     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whaaat is blkthunder back in affect :read:

    i remember reading some of your earlier posts

    hope to read more this is FIYAH :)
     
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    It's all good in dis' hood Robin Hoods.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop blk....
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okok

    Thanks glad you feel it.......

    To the Mad

    Breakdance on stage
    My peoples enslaved
    Remove from the wrist the bling
    It comes from land mined by kings
    Cecil Rhodes is laughing in his grave
    His greatest financers are those enslaved
    While Zaire and the Congo are raped poor
    We shoot in the street saying we want more
    respect----
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling the screams of yesteryears still playing out today. Much power in your words brotha.
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx
    respect
     
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    SEASONed New Member MEMBER

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    No poem to reply. I'm wondering about the spirit that hoist your words. Are they the whispers of our forefathers/mothers? Not a consciousness, but perhaps a conscience, awareness, knowing?
     
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    My art pace is like a sharp taste make you frown and see day-

    Light before you embrace my write, just writes a tight hook

    Then take a bight look at my rhymes as my stats climb shooked
    On phonics with cooked ebonics like barbecue
     
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