Black Poetry : Black, Green, and Red

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Oct 24, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My blood runs black, green, and red
    from the course her on my head
    to the wide nose on my face
    undeniable rythym in my wide hips
    that will one day birth many kings
    to the plumpness of my butt

    My blood runs black, green, and red
    from the proud way I hold my head high
    to the way I walk with style and grace
    thickest juicest lips in the world just
    begging to be tasted and kissed
    to the deep caramel skin drape

    My blood runs black, green, and red
    from the kentay and mud clothe wrap
    to the sexy *** gap between my teeth
    freedom of the wild safaris running through
    begging to be explored and nutured
    to the trading in the market

    My blood runs black, green, and red
    from the steady beats of the djembe
    to the ashiko and djun djun drums
    can't keep my feet still, gotta dance
    giving me my big beautiful calves and thighs
    that keep all eyes truly mesmerized

    My blood runs black, green, and red
    MY BLOOD runs black, green, and red
    black...
    green...
    red...
    My blood.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    through da technicolor maze of Black , Green & Red
    ya soul is black with deep pride ya heart is pure as an
    Red rose and ya line of Green is more then gold yes ya
    blood runs Black Green & Red and ya not alone i too run
    da color maze of morrow .

    This piece welcomes me in i love this flow and it's meanings wow !
    ya my choclatangel
     
  3. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Black

    Excellent write.
     
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    Word!

    I raise the fist for that one! Keep blessing us with this inspiration of yours, Choclatangel.

    One.

    ~Ikorp
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I salute you/me/us..to the Red, Black and green
    yet it's the only flag, that should ever be seen
    You flowed a good one Poet..**claps** to ya.
     
  6. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes mama! This exuberates power and it was wonderful sistah
    nice!

    Sweettee, love
     
  7. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep Do It Gyrl!

    They need to just gone make you Mrs. Africa for the next Miss Universe Pagent cause you got it. I'm awed by your blood! Very Excellente!
     
  8. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH- Thanks, I'm happy I was able to touch you in a special way
    POETRYMAMA- Thanks for the read
    IKORO- Keep that fist raised and I'll keep trying to inspire
    QUEENTSWANA- Thanks for stopping by it means alot
    SWEETTEE- I felt empowered when this piece flowed out of me
    THA-EMISSARY- I know right, they need to just give me my crown, cuz I'm proud to be who I am
     
  9. TreasureEyes

    TreasureEyes Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was simply black-fabulous !!!
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece just exemplifies Black love in all it's glory. Highest of props to you!!!
     
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