Black Poetry : Black Friday Keystyle

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    Black Friday Keystyle

    The original black Friday we must accept and remember on
    September 24, 1869 brothers trying to stay hood slimmer and strong
    Jay Gould came wrong with James fisk takinga lame risk their whole
    Goal and target was to corner the gold market cause it to crash or fold //
    My left foot is a gift hard to put up with holday shopper my menu
    Is distance but to continue in existence have to shop at stores on into
    Christmas, the graphics of traffics is tangle as hell no jingle bell can
    Save you a dang sleigh ride to Walmart can lay your pride down and
    Rip it all apart have to shop tall and smart can’t come with a clown’s plan
    This rhyme deals with shopping and reaveals hopping from
    Store to store galore gets you no where just go there with thumbs
    Up and wait, in a manner of speaking I’m a planner seeking
    Low prices, early progression in search of worldly possessions sneeking
    Here at the Mall, the crowd enlarging people want a proud bargain
    This is the purity of an auction while security provide caution dodging
    The Christmas rush
     
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    IT WAS WITH THIS DROP HERE. I SAW SOME CLARITY OF YOUR STYLE. INFORMATIVE. ENTERTAINING AND CREATIVE RHYMEBAD.

    Sorry about the caps.. I am going to not go back and correct...keep the flow

    Drop me a unfinished piece straight from your head. Make it flow, let me brush off my skills to collaborate with ya. Any subject, but inner thought and perspective commanding the drive. Straight up street .. what you know what u see. :roll:

    A rhymebad
    :jump: head rhyme threatening thrill alliteration :bomb:collaboration :picture:

    :toasts:
     
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    yeah HODEE thanks for the props for real
     
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    Rhymebad, you possess remarkable talent.

    Continue to grow as well as you flow


    PEACE ~
     
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    thanks for all the props for real go tto keep on doing what i'm doing
     
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    How did i get so sleepy?

    My bad Bad

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