Black Poetry : Black Delilah

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through the door she walks.
    Black Delilah!
    Hmmmmmmph girl was
    something else.
    Beautiful and seductive
    liquid and deadly.
    She
    could drain
    you in a moments time
    and leave a man
    moving
    with no rhythm to
    an empty rhyme.
    Black Delilah,
    her words drip with sweet
    flattery and breath.
    Each word sweet to the ear;
    then why do we end
    up locking lips with death?
    She seduces
    and as a recluse with a man's heart,
    she forms a noose
    of whispered words and carnal
    delights,
    like fire to to lard;
    she'll pat a N****'s back,
    and he'll find himself hard.
    Burning fevers,
    dellusions and illusions.
    Delilah grips his manhood and
    it's instant confusion.
    D*** Delilah! How could a woman so
    fine and succulent like you, be so calculating
    and cold?
    A dark, pagan succubus that weakens men
    with sex and takes their soul.
    Black Delilah, groovy and superfine,
    She stands side by side with her
    sugar daddy; satan; forever intertwined.
    Black Delilah
    Stands at the door naked
    and fly,
    inviting these ****** into her bed like a modern
    day Dr. Faust,
    never realizing their like lamb's going to
    a slaughter house.
    Black Delilah, satan's number one ho,
    I warn you!
    Men be watchful and careful about who you
    engage with,
    or who you let pass your door.
    N****'s don't get burnt trying to
    be lusty and playa's in the fiyah,
    or you'll find yourself broken and
    drained by
    Black Delilah.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wyne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umph, you certainly worked your pen on this one. And nowadays, not merely emotionally dangerous, sex can kill, so don't get all caught up til ya know, ya know? Wow....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe fo real
    watch the N word not allowed
     
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    Black Delilah, Huh?
    This is poetically
    correct!
    You exposed her
    all so well!
    Tyte!
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for all of your love and critiquing. I appreciate it greatly.
     
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    Black Deliah Sound like my type of woman.
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: Is that right! LOL I just hope your ready how to deal with her. She's one lady I wouldn't turn my back on anytime. But thanks for the love.
     
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    Well I can deal with Deliah because I am the Male Version of her. :)
     
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    tight drop diggin this
    posed well
    my friend
     
  10. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again I'm speechless with gratitude
     
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