Black Poetry : BLACK CRIME BLACK MIND

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BLACK ON BLACK
    WHY DO WE CONTINUE
    TO KILL
    AT ANY WILL
    FOR THIS CHEAP THRILL
    IT A ALL OUT CRY
    FROM DOOR 2 DOOR
    CITY 2 CITY
    TO BEAT THE STREETS
    IN YO COMMUNITY
    TO END A FIGHT
    ON BLACK ON BLACK CRIME
    THE MIND IS THE WEAPON
    USE THE KNOWLEDGE
    TO FEED DA BRAINS
    OF OUR WEAKER MEN
    STOP DA PREACHING
    START THE TEACHING
    TO STAY IN SCHOOL
    LET YA MIND RULE
    TO CLAIM YA FAME
    WARE DA CROWN
    NO NEED TO CLOWN
    GET THE MEN TO PUT DOWN
    THEIR GUNS HAVE A WILLING
    TO STOP DIS KILLING
    GET THE WOMEN OFF DA BEAT
    OF THE STREET GIVEN THERE
    TREASURE FOR A TREAT
    SALE SELF CHEAP IT'S NO THRILL
    LEAVE ONLY CHILLS
    WE HAVE TO FIGHT BACK FROM
    OUR HEARTS AND CAPTURE
    THE HOOD WHERE MANY STOOD
    IT A CRY ABOUT BLACK ON BLACK
    CRIME WE BEEN LABLED THIS TOO
    LONG DIS OH SO WRONG
    FREEDOM IS WITHIN
    FREE YA MIND
    FREE YA MIND
    FREE YA MIND
    REACH FOR THAT CHILD
    GIVE A SMILE
    SHO SOME LOVE
    GIVE A HUG
    FREE DA SOUL
    FREE DA SOUL
    FREE DA SOUL
    FOR UNITY AS WE UNITED TO FIGHT BACK
    IN EVERY COMMUNITY NATION WIDE
    FREE USE OF WILL
    FREE USE OF WILL
    FREE USE OF WILL
    STOP DA KILLING , RAPE , BEATING ,
    STOP DA MYTH , DA JAILING, DA BLEEDING
    START DA SCHOOLING, DA HOPE
    START DA TEACHING, DA JOURNEY
    START WISDOM TO ALL MINDZ
    LET THE DREAM OF FREEDOM RING
    WE HAVE TO START WITH FIRST LINE
    OF LOVIN SELF AND OTHER
    RESPECT AND HONOR
    IT STARTS WITH BONDING
    LET IT RING , LET IT RING , FREEDOM !!!
    OF THE BLACK MINDZ ..:(
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmm...ok i read this 3 times...
    still stuck....but i like the vibe....
    written with care....place together wonderfully...
    i love your way...
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so nicely written..... alwayz beautiful like ur others....
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    $$RICH$$, this is the anthem. I love this, would love to hear you read this. This is dope, brutha!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blkangel.....it's a statement that we must stop doing each other
    in and killing our dreams and stand up to unite in unity in our
    communities and bond to fight our daily struggles we face
    let it ring sistah let it ring !!

    Da1.....thank u now let this ring to ya mental as we bond to reach
    out and touch another and another let us walk the front line
    with free will and move the stones that holds us back so worriors
    can get through to feed the knowledge and wisdom and teach
    new warriors the real struggles and give hope that's been thousands of years old that our ancestors left us to continue

    gempis.........Thank u and will do for u
    now as this ring let ya hand now be raised and head up high
    as we walk the line of fire to open up the gates so many many
    worriors can do the will of thou motherland which is alive and well
    let this ring in ya heart as it touch da true soul we have to take
    back what's ours and stop the self destruction....

    Thank u all for reading me and giving me hope
     
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    XXPANTHAXX......thankz for feelin da message brutha
    it was u who put it there now my pen just worked it out
    to give light to da people to free da mind and help take
    back what's ours .
     
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    HOW CAN WE EVER GET THE FRONT LINE TO UNITY
    WHEN WE DESTORY ALL THE YOUNG WORRIORS
    BY GUN FIRE AND MISUSED BODIES OF WOMAN
    ALLOWING DRUGS TO CONTROL ONE'S FATE , SIT
    BACK AND WATCH DEATH TO HOMELESS FROM THE
    COLD NIGHTS AND HUNGER KILL FROM NOT A PIECE
    OF BREAD THESE ARE THE STRUGGLES OF MILLIONS

    WHAT CAN WE DO TO LOWER THE NUMBERS ?
    HOW MANY READY TO OFFER WHAT THEY HAVE
    OR JUST WALK PASS ?
    AND TOO LOOK BACK AS U SEE THESE U PASS IS FROM
    THE SAME FAMILY OF MANY MANY YEARS BACK
    THEIR ANCESTORS IS YOURS HOW ABOUT THAT !!!!
     
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    $RICH$$

    Nice flow.

    It is strange how drugs are given to relieve pain. How drinking is used to numb the nerves. Yet both of these have been abused in the community. Now it is deemed Ok to stay numb. As a nation of real people. Like the nation of real people on this land before us. We know you can't water the trees with blood. If it doesn't pour down from the skies. It isn't right. The trees don't want it. So we do have blood rain on the streets. Pouring down the drains, cause gun control has no advocates. No one to stand against the NRA. We are like sheep in a corner. Knowing we are being whipped. Complaining, and pointing fingers. Biting each other in the process. The lash out is misdirected. Then you have those that exploit the moment. The sun comes down from the sky. What is it about the good things taken for granted.

    Keep you looking at the prize of gold. Money and good times. Saying everybody dance. It's like the lies told to the people Hitler lead into the chambers. I just want to clean you up. Then the gas starts.

    You can't hide the hunger. For change. They have a higher criteria for us. Than they hold for themselves. You can't hide the guilt. Of those guilty of the crime against humanity. They must be held for their crime. This community of us. Can make a difference. Are we ready. Are we brave enough. Unselfish enough to give it all. Including the life we talk about that isn't right anyway. Fight and die for something. Is all I understand. But I am smart enough not to take an order to secure a hill of dirt. My fight has to benefit humanity. Me. Those who are afraid to use their voice. Tired of being beaten down. Sick of lack of this and that. Sick because the tormentors are sicker.. and unrelenting in his pressure. Pain.

    Grammar is used to discriminate. Yet we hold the slang of speech like someone is taking bread out of our mouths. I have been told.. no that Vietnamese guy can't have the lead position. He can't speak english. Then I thought about what they say about blacks. This pissed me off. Cause that Vietnamese guy and myself pulled off his success. As humans.. blacks tend to allow many in. Giving all a break. When they want and need to get a ride on our train. Cause they can't make it, or fit yet into the train we all are trying to ride. Then as soon as the conductor shows a bit of interest. Our new found friend jumps ship.. and doesn't look back. Leaving us on the track. In the train going the wrong way.

    Black on Black crime is the fish in a barrel syndrome. We all are crammed into a well known understood glitch. Self manipulated to a degree. So first when things aren't going right you stop. look at the situation and decide if you want to continue in the same fish fight that seems only real. Like the feel of the drugs. It is real.. how it makes you feel. But it may not be good for you.
     
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    HODEE...........thank u
    what u brought out was the inner street truth
    let us march forward to better self and keep hope
    and the dream alive .
     
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    Amen!

    this is a needed message man.

    ghettos and Nubian communities need to hear this worldwide.

    too bad that most of thse kinds of messages are only heard by people who know that we need this kind of movement.

    great work bro!

    peace,
    Soul
     
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