Khasm13 : black burner

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the inscription read
    take what u want...but pay for what u take in lead
    with multiple maniacal thoughts racing through my head
    i think back to my nightmares while pretending to sleep in bed
    belly not fed...starving...living the life of a meager natty dred
    now, as i stand at this crossroad...an imp on my shoulder begs for me to shed
    the morals that i live by
    begs for me to let out the grotesque beast inside
    begs for me to take this bizare ride
    i've been bumming for so long
    what remains of my sensibility has taken off to run and hide
    at just the mere suggestion of changing forces to the darkside
    forsaking the bs laws that i was taught to abide
    my soul is torn between jeckle and hyde
    with the latter winning
    the whole world is sinning since the beginning
    of time...and i'm spending...too much time...worried about mine
    i'm...so tired of getting fired
    so tired of being so wired
    so tired of not being hired
    because of the way i talk and look
    the hook of stereotypical bumps and bruises has me shook
    one time too many
    phuc books...in my eyes they only add up to a penny
    i've lost many battles...seems like i haven't won any
    thas why i'm glaring at this burner on the ground in the streets of the windy city
    again i am reminded of this imp...who is now screaming that i'm a wimp
    if i don't pick up this tool to being a pimp
    and feed the hellhounds lobster and shrimp
    gansta walk with a pretend limp
    and pack pillows filled with cocaine and hemp
    [email protected] this imp....that keeps on whisperin
    pleading for me to pick up and pack this piece thas glistenin
    as the oily arid sweat slowly drips from my fist and
    i think...pondering wwjd has gotten me nowhere
    life is not fair...too long have i been trapped in this ethereal prision
    my decision is made...i deciede to give into this crash course collision
    i pick up the gat...
    and start spliting shells on a mission like nuclear fission...
     
  2. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deep

    I haven't had the pleasure of reading anything like this in a while. I see now that I am not the only one that ponders wheter or not it is worth while to continue walking the straight and narrow or going off on my own tangent. I like this b/c its real adn its the truth not everybody always knows what to do. :wink:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, I had to mention that the rhymes were great, even though they always are. This piece made me think of those movie scenes where someone had an angel on one shoulder, and the devil on the other, not sure which one to listen to. I loved the creative way you brought this poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    crossroad to right and wrong who home and who gone
    should i do it or should i wait the mental mind just don't know
    til the heart take control ....but what way ! well felt scribe....
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a gem,whut a gem...opening lines had me hooked right in...khasm killin words with his murderous verbs...ya heard?!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at last, a poet who has brought my eyes back to the forum with skills.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khas....you are such a raw poet.....i always enjoy reading your words:)
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    raw seems such a good word for you...
    powerful and skillful...
    nice khasm...really nice
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I missed reading your writing. I haven't visited in nearly a year. This was the most amazing lines I read in quite some time. Hope they inspire something to come out my pen.
     
  10. mzpoetic8705

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    WOW....you are a TRUE poet....very powerful! I wish it could've been longer. I hate it when i get all into a poem, and then it ends...lol...but that's good b/c it keeps the reader coming back for more... :)
     
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