Black Poetry : BLACK & BLUE INK

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside the chambers
    of my solo slumber
    lay two pens
    half past
    little to none
    Black & Blue
    ink dry paper blank
    mind weaved off
    into a far region of
    nowhere yet moving
    spinning in motion
    da black soul hollow
    the blue path closed
    so in silent
    only a what was looms
    i write what's not seen
    with mental vision
    it was script in a stroll
    unfolding self from the
    cornerstone yet covered
    Black & Blue ink dryed
    the pens only hope was
    taken
    I tried and tried yet nothing
    so inside a hush
    whispers of a meaning leak
    yet broken lines between lines
    one day the wall will fall and
    allow me to see from the looking
    glass of mindz until mines
    quietly hush inside
    BLACK & BLUE
    a set call black & blue
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this in so many ways
    Like a lost battle…
    But wont give up…
    In the middle of no where….
    but some where
    Not able to move….
    But the thoughts run thru
    In a mental vision that is stuck….
    tryin not to feel a way
    but its there.....
    yea
    i am feelin this
    love when you do what you do...
    i be back to this one...if not to reply
    but just to read....placin a
    thought on da mind
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pen in hand, bruised but not beaten...I hear you in scribe...feeling this vibe.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin this more than you'll ever know.......tyte flow...much luv for this one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel & watz & Foxy
    as the ink dry pens lay cap side
    cold and un used black & blue..
     
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    da pens of old replaced wit new
    da emotions flowin and tyme
    blew bye from da black & blue
    ink stain to the pad
    blanked yet i read the written
    wordz pen
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...it was script in a stroll...unfolding self from the cornerstone...yet covered...
    my favorite line I think...this is the stuff I love Bro. Rich....a script in a stroll ?
    **** !!! five words so cold...lovin this one ...absolutely !!!
     
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    well i dip back in...hope ya dont mind...
    i likes this mental flow....

    Inside the slumber is
    Where you lay solo
    With two pens
    Almost empty
    Black & Blue
    As the paper lay blank
    As thoughts run
    Nowhere yet movin
    for the mental flows
    A vision across the mind
    Begins to roam
    Unfolding to the blind
    Yet covered
    Black& Blue ink
    Tryin and tryin
    As the ink runs dry
    Inside a hush
    As you look within the
    Looking glass quietly
    You lay with a watchful eye…..Angel
     
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